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Great Unexpectations Chapter 6
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"I think I will be. Thanks for telling me, Tina. It’s still hard though. Thinking of you and him. Together."
"I know. I’ve been there, remember?" Bette, glanced away sadly, remembering her own indiscretions. "It’ll take time, babe. But in the meantime, why don’t you just try to think of you and me together."
Bette looked into Tina’s eyes as they came closer, both in anticipation of the kiss that was imminent. The events of last night and the conversation of the morning having totally exhausted them, they soon fell back to sleep in each other’s arms only to be woken thirty minutes later by the sounds of Angelica’s morning musings heard over the crackle of the baby monitor.
Later that morning Tina was putting on her dress as Bette and Angie watched adoringly from the bed. "Isn’t Mama pretty, Boo?" Bette cooed. Boo agreed, clapping fanatically.
"Thank you sweetie", Tina beamed at Angie. "And you too", as she walked over to the bed and leaned down to kiss Bette.
"Mmm. We’ll miss you."
"I’ll be back."
"Um, T?" Bette hesitated. "You know, you can, um, bring some of your things over if you want to. I mean, you don’t have to if you’re not ready, but uh, I ‘d like it if some of your things were here", she smiled nervously.
Tina froze and studied Bette’s crimsoned expression. She sat beside her on the bed and put her hand on Bette’s thigh. "Bette, are you sure? It’s not too fast?"
"It probably is, T, but I don’t care. I want you to be able to spend the night without having to pack a bag first."
"Well, maybe just a few things", she smiled.
Bette smiled as they kissed. "Good."
As they walked to the front door Tina paused with a slight trepidation. "God, I’ve never been so afraid to open a door before."
"Don’t be afraid, T. We’re doing so good. Go home and get some sleep. Call me when you wake up. Please drive carefully. Oh, and good luck with that yogurt situation."
Tina rolled her eyes and laughed. Bette held Angie up so that Tina could hug and kiss her goodbye and then placed her back on the floor to play with her toys. She pulled Tina into a long, slow kiss.
"Bye Tina. Remember, call me when you get up."
"I will."
About five minutes after the door closed there came a knock. Bette hurried to open it so that she could be greeted by a last minute kiss from Tina. She was shocked to see Alice standing there with an ear-to-ear grin. "You are so busted, Porter!!"
TBC
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I think I am firs t, but, alas I am really tring to get some work done so I will have to come back to this as a special treat when I get a few things finished… I hate to admit this but I am really new to this site…would someone be kind enough to explain the ratings.the how to part…thanks
i hope tina will bring a lot of her things…it might be too soon but they need to deal with that together, and angie seems happier too :)
Uh oh da gossip monger’s there! LOL Loving ur story Red !!! :) Amazingly Fantastically Beautifully Adorably lovely just so niceee ahh..Thanks for writing it :) Keep going u r doing a gr8 job and i hope to see the award on ur page the next time !!! :Dokay back to work…
You have excellent writing ability. Your English teacher was correct, you do have a wy with words even if it is to write lesbian soft porn. *smirk* It’s a tough job (seriously) to write NC-17s well. Please continue w/the s/l b/c it is very interesting. PPS.
I am so happy to read this chapter Ms. Red. Wonderful . PPS
Tina needs to go get the U-HAUL and drag Alice’s nosy ass to help her move back into Porter-Kennard kingdom. Nuf said! LUV’d THIS POST!
You deserve more than just a nomination! You write beautifully.
They are lucky Alice didn’t show up before now! Talk about hell on wheels! LOL! I wonder if Alice was waiting for Tina to leave or if it just seemed that way with her showing up just afterwards. What a great post Red! Your writing is absolutely brilliant. It was beautiful the way you had Bette telling Tina how much her C-Section scar means to her. Their talk of the past was hard but they need to do that…and it’s good they are doing it in spurts. Thanks for writing Red and please post soon!
Loving your story – just got back into town and on line for the first time in weeks and your story was a wonderful thing to find. You really capture the loving tone that makes me care about these two characters – thanks so much for your humor and sweetness in your storytelling. You definitely deserve to be nominated.
What a great ending!! Loving this story, PPS
That was awesome!
You made my morning. I was unable to continue with my own sleep so I read this story. Now I know that today will be a good day.
Busted!!! was Al next door, I forget…pps
Adoring this story :) Beautiful expressiv writing. :) I’m looking forward to the next addition.
Firstly, you deserve those noms, red–your writing is excellent. Secondly, the “lesbian soft porn” remark is pretty funny, but I think this chapter’s a good bit better than that phrase suggests. Thirdly, the pacing of the story is spot-on. Keep it up. Fourthly, I knew the peace couldn’t last for long, and now that Ms. “Rude Awakening” Pieszecki is on the scene, well… And lastly, I’ll have to repeat myself and say that this chap was awesome. So, post soon, red. Thanks
I second all five of jp22’s points. That four-star rating must have been a technical glitch because there is simply no logical explanation for it. You are one of the best writers on this site and I would have been shocked if you hadn’t been nominated. I especially admire how you ground your writing in the concrete, Angie’s inner “thoughts” (pears vs. squash) being a prime example: exquisite. As for the lesbian soft porn, let’s just say page 3 of this instalment is assuming pride of place in my archives file.
Great chapter!! Love the B&T lovin. PPS!!
LOL@chickenshit! One of my favorite terms. I’ll have to remember “bitch on wheels” as well. Definitely a hot chapter!