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Great Unexpectations Chapter 7
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Previously…
"Bye Tina. Remember, call me when you get up."
"I will."
About five minutes after the door closed there came a knock. Bette hurried to open it so that she could be greeted by a last minute kiss from Tina. She was shocked to see Alice standing there with an ear-to-ear grin. "You are so busted, Porter!!"
Chapter 7.
Bette stood, dumbfounded at the sight of Alice at her doorstep. "Hi, Alice. What’s up?", she said trying to sound nonchalant. "Don’t ‘what’s up’ me, Porter. I’ve been trying to call you for two days. Spill it!! I want details!!", she announced as she walked in uninvited.
"Alice, I don’t know what you’re talking about", Bette said, closing the door as she bit the inside of her cheeks, trying to conceal her smile.
"Can it, B. I saw Tina leaving a few minutes ago. She was so happy she was practically skipping. "
"She was?" Bette asked releasing her wide smile.
"Aha!!!", she pointed at Bette victoriously. "I knew it!! You guys totally did it! Don’t even try lyin’ to me, Bette. Come on, it’ll be easier on both of us if you just fess up right now."
Bette hesitated, still smiling, knowing that Alice was like a dog with a bone, and would not let this go. She finally threw her hands up in submission. "Alright, alright. I give. You win."
Alice jumped up and down clapping like a schoolgirl before taking Bette in a hug. "Oh my god! This is great!! So, when did this happen?"
"About a week ago."
"A week!?! You guys have been boinking for a week and I didn’t know about it? I must be slippin’."
"No, that’s not exactly it. Um, it’s complicated, Al. We still have some things to work out. And you can’t say anything. To anybody", she warned.
"Why? Everybody would love to know this. Shane will pee her pants, she’ll be so happy."
Jesus Fucking Christ. Of all the people who could show up on my doorstep, why did it have to be Alice ‘the chart’ Pieszecki?
Alice, noticing the smile on Bette’s face slowly fading, quieted immediately. "Bette, what’s wrong? Oh shit, did you fuck it up already? What’d you say this time?"
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I’d better be first ’cause I LOVED that chapter :D “This too” :) I love your story.. Tina and Bette reunited :’D Your wonderful writing makes it difficult to not enjoy :) Well done, post soon :)
I’m well impressed, red. You keep topping yourself. Excellent. More soon, please!
Oh, heck. This page has refreshed, and that last comment came out 31 flavors of wrong, either side of the pond. I meant excelling yourself, or something like. You know what I meant though, right, red? Ack, this is what I get for staying up this late on a weeknight. Still tho, post soon!
Another great chappie Red, thanks for updating. And JP, your comment made sense although with you falling all over to clarify your intended meaning the image of “topping yourself” took on a whole new light!! LOL. Don’t worry, all the kids are doing it these days!! *wink*
you were fine the first time jp. laughing my ass off!! thanks for the words though.
So Tina’s handiwork was more extensive than we thought. I did notice the word, redhorse, but truth be told page 3 of chapter 6 went into my archives file because of the scorching-hot Tibette sex scene. Tina and Bette aren’t the only ones basking in the afterglow in chapter 7. I do wonder if Alice can zip it for three whole days; that seems a tad ambitious. And I hate to say it, jp, but the double entendre occurred to me only after I read your clarification. But then I can be pretty slow on the uptake.
great update..i was too surprised that alice would wait, but will she really? thanks for keeping tibette together
Great chapter! PPS!!
Another wonderful chapter made even better with the return of the Sharpie! Much more than ‘mildly amusing’… love your writing especially the playful B & T.
Red you are soooo good! It was hilarious when Alice found the writing on Bette’s back side that Bette didn’t even know about! If anyone is watching me they probably think I’m crazy because I’m sitting here giggling to myself with the thought of that scene playing over and over in my mind. The look on Bette’s face is classic. This was so much more than “mildly amusing!” Thank you Red for the happy days! More please!
Thanks for the lovely story and excellent update. More please.
loved the dialogue…excellent update.
LMFAO@This too! XD Wow, so Alice is giving them 3 days. Is that 3 days in real people time or 3 days in Alice time, which is about the same as 10 seconds?
You just gotta love this. Cracking up at Tina marking her territory, you go girl. 3-days, wow, I don’t know how Alice is gonna do it. Bette love tina, now she just needs to learn a bit of trust.
Wonderful!
oh what a happy chapter…even Alice isn’t gonna blow it for them…u have to post soon…
Red….You’re smooth. Your writing is smooth, freakin’ funny and realistic dialogue w/all the characters. You do have a way w/words, so natural. You must be very clever and comedic in person. PPS. I can’t wait.
I started this story last night but thunder and lightening forced me turn off the computer. I was bummed by that because I was really getting into the chapter. I have always loved the banter between Bette and Tina. That is something that the show has missed out on. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Oh, I do love the body art that Tina put on Bette.