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Great Unexpectations Chapter 8
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Alice looked at Tina pleadingly, hoping to at least share the duties of The Fucked. "Sorry, Al", Tina grinned as she shrugged her shoulders. She gently brought her hand down on the table and lifted it, revealing her own silver plated game piece.
"Alright. This was a total setup. No way did you all just ‘happen’ to have your coins", Alice protested.
"Quit bitchin’ and go get my drink, woman!!", barked Shane through her laughter. The rest of the table broke out into laughter as Helena and Papi slowly began to understand what was happening. To the outside world it would seem cruel. But not to Bette, Tina, and Shane. Alice had taken great delight in initiating the game many times in the past, and she was not a kind Queen.
"Uh huh. I still say one of you guys stole mine", she said as she gathered the first round of drink orders.
"Martini. Two olives, please", said Bette.
"Gin and juice, Al", said Tina.
Shane just smiled. "You know what I want."
"Oh Christ, Shane. Are you kidding me with this? I hate ordering that drink. It looks fucking disgusting."
Shane just smiled and shook her head. "Go get it."
"Wait up, Alice. I’ll help", Tina said, feeling a little guilty about being clued in by Bette.
They headed to the bar as Shane took Tina’s seat next to Bette. She put her arm around Bette. "This is so great!! We have our Super Couple back", Shane practically glowed not noticing the uncomfortable look coming over Bette’s face.
"Hey, Shane? Can I talk to you for a minute?"
"Sure, Bette. What’s up?"
Bette stood and motioned for Shane to follow her to a somewhat quieter corner.
"Shane, first of all I just want you to know how much Tina and I love you. You’ve always been there for us, supporting us. I know the last couple of years haven’t exactly been the easiest."
Shane nodded. "I’m just so glad it finally worked out for you guys. You’re a perfect couple."
"About that", Bette hesitated. "Please don’t take this the wrong way, but could you, maybe, tone it down with that kind of talk?"
Shane furled her brows in confusion.
" ‘Super couple’. ‘Perfect couple’." Bette clarified, "That’s a high pedestal to fall from. It puts a lot of pressure on us to be, well, perfect."
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OMFG!!!! WOW!!!!! this is getting real good. Thanks PPS
Just read this story.. the whole thing thus far. WTF is Faye Buckley doing? I loved the little Bette and Tina moments. Sweet.
Wow, Faye Buckley, I was expecting the usual Candace. This should be interesting.
What is Faye Buckleydoing at The Planet? How does she even know that place exists? Well, that has so much Drama Queen potential, it’s scary. Not exactly what B&T need at the moment when they’re really trying to make things work. Bette is so adorable asking Shane to keep an eye out for her. Is Tina going to ask Bette to wear her ring again? Maybe she’ll give Bette a new ring as proof of her re-commitment. Award or no award, your story is still captivating. Thanks for posting.
I HATE Faye Buckley ¬_¬ But B&T are so adorable. Like, so sweet :)
Our girls are officially back together and you throw in Faye Buckley, talk about a cold shower.
Nothing like an unexpected dose of über bitch to put the kibosh on a good night out. Other than the unwelcome appearance of that cow Buckley, this was a great chapter, red. Loved the group interaction (Dana is still a miss), and it’s a good thing Bette’s let in Shane on the fact that sometimes a swift kick to the fabulous Porter derrière is a necessity. Hard lines on not getting an award, but your writing’s a winner in my book. Thanks for the post, and more soon, please.
Great story and update. But is Faye “effing” Buckely not dead in your story? Oh my gosh, we really don’t need her right about now. Mercy. Get rid of her please before she causes huge problems. I was so happy when somebody shot her last year or was it 2005. Whenever, I thought she was gone for good. Anyway, love the story and the great big plus is that you have “our girls” back together. PPS
I was expecting CandyAss not Faye “Cold-hearted Biatch” Buckley!
OMG! WTF, I hope Tina was watching Bette walk to the bar so she can smack the hell out of that woman. She has some nerve even speaking to Bette.
hello…what is fay doing there? i always knew that she was secretly in love with bette LOL
“I won’t, Shane. I promise”, Bette paused. Then somberly realizing it sounded very Bette Porter indeed, said, “But if I do, then you’ll know I’m in trouble and that’s when I’ll need you the most. ” Great…Great..>Very wise! And Faye? Fuck! Wow!:)
From the divine Amy Winehouse, to that appalling Bloody Brain drink, to the even more appalling Faye Buckley, this chapter has it all! And it WAS great fun to read, especially the Alice-gets-punked bits. The evil Ms. Buckley is as rare as the dodo bird on this site, so I can’t wait to see what you do with her. Incidentally, for all the good it did her Lindsay Lohan should have said no no no to rehab just like Amy did.
OMFG!! Faye Buckley? What the hell is she doing there? Looking for her next victim to insult and abuse? If I were her, I’d RUN! The only reason Bettte didn’t put the “smack down” on Faye last time, was because they were on TV. But the camera’s not rolling now, BIIATCH!! Let the games BEGIN!!!LOL!
What the Hell is Faye Buckley doing at the Planet? I love how Bette confided in Shane and I love Amy Winehouse! PPS!!
dodadododododo,what is Fay going to do, Can’t wait. Md
You just threw a major twist into this story with Faye Buckley. What the hell is she doing in the Planet? Bette does not need this, but I will guarantee you that Tina will be standing by Bette’s side.
Holy hypocites!! Faye Buckley! No you didn’t! LOL. So glad the next post is already up…
This is really a wonderful story to read, but what the heck is Faye doing at the Planet, I look forward to the next installment please post again soon, sorry you got no award.
Bloody Brain? LOL Damn when was the last time we had Faye Buckley in a story? It’s been awhile. Bring it on!
oh no what a way to ruin your night; get the girls to deal to her…great update…commiserations about not winning but hey its the story and reader passion that counts so, so what? right on!!!!
OMG, well this should be interesting.
Good chapter, Alice is funny, what the hell is Faye Buckley doing here!