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Half Bliss- Chapter 5
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“Is Bette… Is she…” Alice left the question unfinished but they knew exactly what she meant. It was likely. It would be unfortunate but highly likely especially in this case.
More tears trickled down Kit’s cheeks. She looks up to meet their eyes with her red puffy ones and nodded weakly. They dissolved together into a fountain of grief…
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Bette walked around in awe with the beauty. She was totally absorbed with nature’s originality. She sat down and took a deep breath. It was nice. Relaxing to be able to finally be alone with her own thoughts. She stretched out her legs and leaned back to the bench in an effort to ease the strain on her lower back. Ouch!
She pulled back in pain and a figure stumbled onto the floor right in front of her. She immediately got up and helped her, ignoring the throbbing.
“I’m so sorry. I didn’t see you coming. Are you ok?” The smile spread out in front of her, revealing a beautiful brunette.
“I’m fine. It’s a habit of mine- falling for beautiful ladies in parks. Quite literally…” Her deep gaze and not so subtle flirting caught Bette off guard. She blushed instantly and it didn’t go unnoticed by the other brunette.
“Hi, I’m Helena Peabody,” There it was again the sexy blue eyes and undeniably attractive accent. Bette shook hands with her and turned a deeper shade of red.
“I’m Bette.”
“Just Bette?”
“Just Bette.” A playful smile tugged her lips as the stranger continued to roam her body with those smothering look. Bette let out an awkward chuckle and squirmed under her blatant appreciation.
“Well, I better get going now. I have an important date tonight. I’ll see you around, just Bette,” Helena winked at her suggestively before breaking into a run leaving Bette flushed with unchecked desires.
“Yea…” The throbbing was long forgotten as Bette wandered off thinking about her attraction towards… women. Or just Helena.
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“Hey, baby sis. Where have you been? I’ve been worried sick about you.” Kit hugged Bette in relief as soon as she walked past the front door of her home. Her voice was uneven and fear was written all over her. Bette felt bad about going off alone but kept quiet. Stubbornness prevented her from apologizing to her worried sister.
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Thud! Did you just leave us there? Jawdropped. Well, hurry up and get us out of this hanging situation. Thanks for sharing. PPS
Oh my God! You just didn’t leave it there like that did you. Great story and I definitely think it’s going to get into a really really tight knot! Thank you and great writing :)
OMG, you can’t just leave it there! Come back…please.
Hey MHGD, great update. Its good to see Bette improving, and Kit willing to release her reins on Bette a little. I’m unsure if I want to know the identity of Bette’s attacker, but he has some balls asking to see her after what he did. I can’t wait to see Bette’s interaction with all the girls, especially Tina. Will she remember Tina, will there be that instant attraction between them, or will Bette take her que from Kit and go along with Kit’s reaction. Can’t for your next update. Thanks for writing. PPS.
Another good chapter. Bette’s trying to piece together her past at her own pace. Hopefully she’s able to have some connection with the girls without it feeling too forced. The Helena thing… that could be interesting. Very interesting indeed. Now then, was that Bette remembering Tina, or Kit saying Tina’s name there? Hope to find out soon. Thanks for the post. Cheers :)