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Half Bliss- Chapter 5
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“Are you feeling alright? Please call me the next time you’re thinking of going out- alone.” Kit tried hard not to project her anger at Bette. She merely nodded in reply, deep in her own thoughts it seemed.
“I told the Alice and Shane.” Bette looked up and stared at her sister saying nothing. She knew they were supposed to be part of her family that they were her best friends and yet she could help but to feel forced. She felt goaded into liking them just because…
“They want to visit you. Tomorrow?” Silence.
“Ok.” A chance. They deserved it but she didn’t have to like it. It felt like she was being pushed and forced to like certain things and people just because of Bette.
Well that Bette is gone as far as she knows…
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“Kit. Can you tell me about Isa?” Bette casually asked whilst playing with her half eaten pancake. Kit was looking like a deer caught in the headlights. Isa was her nickname. They were two and since both of the little girls’ names were long and hard to pronounce, they would call each other Isa and Bette.
“How did you- Have you been remembering more stuff now?”
“Not much. Just a little about Isa… and mom,” It was still a sore point to Bette. She maintained eye contact with Kit hoping for some answers this time around.
“What do you want to know?” Kit’s eyes softened at the memory of little Isa and Bette playing with her.
“Everything and anything…” A genuine smile. They talked for hours while waiting for the girls to come by during lunchtime.
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Tina straightened her skirt once again before taking a deep cleansing breath to calm herself. She was going to make it right again. With her heart hanging by her sleeves, Tina reached out to ring the bell. A laughter interrupted. She heard the wonderful laughter of Bette and smiled softly.
“I’ll get it…” Bette broke into a slow jog to the door. She was excited about meeting the girls after Kit told her a bit about the both of them. The funny adventures and mischief both Alice and Shane indulged in the past as Kit recalls has made Bette look forward to getting to know them again.
“Hi..”
“Tina” A soft whisper by her ears…
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Thud! Did you just leave us there? Jawdropped. Well, hurry up and get us out of this hanging situation. Thanks for sharing. PPS
Oh my God! You just didn’t leave it there like that did you. Great story and I definitely think it’s going to get into a really really tight knot! Thank you and great writing :)
OMG, you can’t just leave it there! Come back…please.
Hey MHGD, great update. Its good to see Bette improving, and Kit willing to release her reins on Bette a little. I’m unsure if I want to know the identity of Bette’s attacker, but he has some balls asking to see her after what he did. I can’t wait to see Bette’s interaction with all the girls, especially Tina. Will she remember Tina, will there be that instant attraction between them, or will Bette take her que from Kit and go along with Kit’s reaction. Can’t for your next update. Thanks for writing. PPS.
Another good chapter. Bette’s trying to piece together her past at her own pace. Hopefully she’s able to have some connection with the girls without it feeling too forced. The Helena thing… that could be interesting. Very interesting indeed. Now then, was that Bette remembering Tina, or Kit saying Tina’s name there? Hope to find out soon. Thanks for the post. Cheers :)