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    Heartbeat – Chapter 27

    Story written on February 27, 2013 by teegirl.
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    Chapter 27

    Previously…

    “Shit, I’m sorry.” Shane glanced from Bette to Tina. “But that’s a good thing, right? That means you can be with Tina.” Shane stopped and reached out to Bette. “You want to be with Tina, right?”

    Bette glanced from Shane to Tina, whose arms were linked with Alice and Dana. She watched as the three women walked in sync and laughed ahead of them. “Don’t you think we’re moving too fast? I mean, it’s only been a few weeks.”

    “I can’t answer that for you, Bette.”

     

     

    Chapter 27

     

    Tina, her arms linked with Alice and Dana’s, glanced over her shoulder at Bette who seemed to be in deep conversation with Shane.

    Alice turned to look at Bette and Shane and directed her gaze at Tina. “So, Tina…what’s going on with you and Bette? Are you two back together?”

    “Yeah, Tina…we couldn’t help but notice how you were looking at her.” Dana chimed in.

    Tina gave her friends a smile. “Yeah, we’re back together.” Tina bit her bottom lip. “She got her divorce papers the other day, but she hasn’t looked at them yet. She’s going to meet her attorney to go over the documents.”

    “Well, that’s a good thing.” Dana replied.

    “It is a good thing.” Tina admitted.

    “I told Bette that Andrea could be your twin, but she wouldn’t listen. I mean, I like her and she was good for Bette, but there would be times when I would catch Bette looking at Andrea and wondered if she was thinking about you.” Alice turned to look at Bette. “So, tell me how you saved her life.”

    “I didn’t save her life. She came in to the emergency room with chest pains and I ran into James in the E.R. and told me basically that Bette was my patient.” Tina stopped in the middle of the sidewalk and looked at Alice and Dana. “I swear I felt my heart drop to the floor when I saw her lying on the gurney in obvious pain. All these emotions that I thought I had buried came rushing back in full force. I literally had to get my shit together and treat her like a patient and not someone whom I was in love with…”

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    1. First one mmmm.Well i have enjoyed this story and i find it has moved along.Still more to tell.Possibly you should take a step back for a while and come back to it when you feel refreshed.I have enjoyed it and i am sure others have as well.

    2. Hey t, you’ve got nothing to worry about, the story is flowing nicely. Just take your time and don’t rush, will be here patiently waiting… post soon

    3. Nothing wrong with the pace of the story. If you have an endpoint to the plot that you have in mind, it’s just working out how you get there, and if the things you wanted to see happen along the way are happening. Maybe a step back and looking at it with fresh eyes will help, but I’m definitely enjoying the story. Thanks, tg. :)

    7. You’re doing a great job with the story. Enjoying the story and I always look for a new chapter when I come to the site. The pace is just right. You might want to make an outline of the prior chapters and also for the rest of the story and you will probably find that you are on pace with what you wanted to happen in the story then just continue the outline for the rest of the story and you will now what you want to happen next and the fillers that you will want to add. Don’t worry, you are doing a wonderful job and I LOVE THIS STORY. I always want to see them together. Take your time but keep writing. lol Thanks.

    10. That was a sweet chapter……it is flowing nicely I like it just take your time….maybe you can start on something new while you are waiting on something for that one

    11. Not being a writer I am unsure of your process for getting a story from inception to paper to conclusion! As a reader I enjoy the style of the story, it reads smoothly, without gaps where I am left wondering how that just happened! As for pace, I have two thoughts..if it is the pace of Tina/Bette’s reuniting in the story I think it is good…if you mean how often the chapters appear here, well, I am always looking for another chapter in this story and miss it when I see it is not listed! There are a few stories I really miss when they are not in the list of the day and this is one of them! Keep on keeping on you are doing a great job for this reader!

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