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    Heartbeat – Chapter 27

    Story written on February 27, 2013 by teegirl.
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    Chapter 27

    “But Bette’s fine now, right?” Dana asked.

    “Yeah, Bette said she was okay.”

    “Bette’s fine. I think the stress of being a first-year president of the university and her divorce was getting to her.” Tina once again linked her arms through Alice and Dana’s and they continued with their walk. “I met her you know…Andrea. I met her at the hospital. Her hair’s longer than mine and maybe a shade darker, but you’re right…we do look alike.”

    “Man that must have been something,” said Alice.

    “She basically told me that Bette was still in love with me and that this was our second chance.”

     

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    “I can’t answer that for you, Bette.”

    “You know, Shane, I look at her and I’m so in love with her…she takes my breath away.” Bette confessed. “I feel like I’m home when I’m with her and it’s so easy being with her again.”

    “Then that’s a good thing Bette,” said Shane.

    “Is it supposed to be this easy? My marriage is over and I’m back with whom I’m meant to be with.”

    “Bette, all I can say is providence. You love Tina and from what I can see Tina loves you.”

    Bette gave her friend a smile. “Yeah, she loves me. How did I get so lucky?” Bette chuckled. “Come on, let’s catch up to them.”

    They five women spent two hours at the Greek restaurant catching up and reminiscing; wine flowed and laughter ensued. Despite the eight years of not being together, each felt the eight years drift away.

    After the lunch Tina gave the women a tour of her one square mile city; the city that had become her home. Tina linked an arm thru Bette’s. Tina stepped in front of Ralph’s ice cream.

    “Do you guys want some Italian ice? This place is really good.” Tina asked Bette and her friends.

    Bette tugged Tina’s hand. “I’m game. You know me…come on.”

     

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    “Today was a good day.” Tina confessed as she sat on the bed. “Alice and Dana are settled in the guest room and I set up the couch for Shane…that’s if she comes home.”

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    1. First one mmmm.Well i have enjoyed this story and i find it has moved along.Still more to tell.Possibly you should take a step back for a while and come back to it when you feel refreshed.I have enjoyed it and i am sure others have as well.

    2. Hey t, you’ve got nothing to worry about, the story is flowing nicely. Just take your time and don’t rush, will be here patiently waiting… post soon

    3. Nothing wrong with the pace of the story. If you have an endpoint to the plot that you have in mind, it’s just working out how you get there, and if the things you wanted to see happen along the way are happening. Maybe a step back and looking at it with fresh eyes will help, but I’m definitely enjoying the story. Thanks, tg. :)

    7. You’re doing a great job with the story. Enjoying the story and I always look for a new chapter when I come to the site. The pace is just right. You might want to make an outline of the prior chapters and also for the rest of the story and you will probably find that you are on pace with what you wanted to happen in the story then just continue the outline for the rest of the story and you will now what you want to happen next and the fillers that you will want to add. Don’t worry, you are doing a wonderful job and I LOVE THIS STORY. I always want to see them together. Take your time but keep writing. lol Thanks.

    10. That was a sweet chapter……it is flowing nicely I like it just take your time….maybe you can start on something new while you are waiting on something for that one

    11. Not being a writer I am unsure of your process for getting a story from inception to paper to conclusion! As a reader I enjoy the style of the story, it reads smoothly, without gaps where I am left wondering how that just happened! As for pace, I have two thoughts..if it is the pace of Tina/Bette’s reuniting in the story I think it is good…if you mean how often the chapters appear here, well, I am always looking for another chapter in this story and miss it when I see it is not listed! There are a few stories I really miss when they are not in the list of the day and this is one of them! Keep on keeping on you are doing a great job for this reader!

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