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CHAPTER 2
Present Day …… a week later ……
The sound of the phone sounds fills all the room
-Hello ….
– You are now calm down?
-Excuse me … but is… that ……
-You have to understand that is no one else in my life ….. No one else …..
if I have not made our relationship official is because … you know the boys
…..
-Yes, but for how long I have to wait?.
-Look … let’s do this … give me a year, please one year, and we take the
next step in our relationship…. my boys, Let them finish used to you…. in my life. What do you say?
-Ok
-Well .. Now I have to go to surgery
– I love you
-Same.
Tina looks out through the glass of her office, from where she can see the
breathtaking view of the city, even though the landscape invites lost in it.
Tina Kennard only be discussed in an internal struggle. her inner self is
revealed by the relationship with Bette. Maintains an internal struggle, is
well aware that things are not right, in its most intimate conviction Tina
knows that’s Bette is cheating on her. And what hurts the most is the feeling
so cowardly to do nothing to prevent it.
-Tina … Helena stops to see her friend lost
in thought. Helena’s
handsome face was full of concern, she meets Tina for a lifetime. Since she
entered at school, remained friends in adolescence, together discovered her
taste for women, Helena was step by step with Tina when Tina’s parents died in
an accident. If anyone why Helena Peabody have to make sacrifices is precisely
this woman who’s there staring, hunched shoulders. Helena is about to get a few
inches from Tina. Who is so distracted in thought that has not realized that no
longer alone.
– All the money that you can ask, I
change you for your thoughts.
-Helena!. Tina is shocked to feel the hot breath of Helena.
-What happens?
-Nothing’s wrong.
-What’s wrong?. Helena asks again.
-Is … That …. I
… do not know what to do …. With my life … Tina breaks into tears and lunges Helena ….
A while back
…..
A few years…..
Tina wakes up from surgery that removed a scar she carried with her a long time
slowly opens her eyes, throat feels very dry, next to her is her inseparable
friend Helena.
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That was great and love it, please post more, thanks!
Thank you for sharing your story with us; I gave it 5 stars for the effort. However, I find it extremely disturbing that Bette is actually flirting (and I assume, contemplating an affair) with another woman (a patient, too, no less) when her wife is currently dying of cancer. It doesn’t matter anymore if her marriage has been rotten or her wife has been particularly horrible to her. It just seems all sorts of wrong to me that she should be doing this to her dying wife. There are heartless people out there, but they’re not the Bette and Tina that I know from the show. To each her own I suppose. Thank you for posting.
I think the plot behind your story could be a good one, however the language is still a barrier, therefore, maybe the story is not coming right as you intended, plus, trying to understand what you wrote every 4 words, takes the fun out of reading it.
I’m not sure what your native language but I’d gladly help you with American/English if you’d like. I feel that it’s unfair to give negative feedback when you are sharing something from your heart. Thank you for this and if I can help maybe someone who speaks your language and translate into English for you, and reading this as well can help. Great drama, it gets my blood boiling and I kind of like it 😃👍