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Heartbroken
-Hello
-You came!. Completely disarming smiles Bette Tina.
– I can sit?
-Of course I do …. Want a drink?
-A beer is good ….
Bette does signal to the waitress who is rapidly approaching the table. Bette
orders. Once alone two women look and smile.
-Well, here we are ….
-So … The beers arrive Bette raises her pitcher.
-Here’s the meeting of two lonely souls.
-That we?
-I think if … if not how do you explain this unexpected attraction
Both stare suddenly not sure because a smile emerges on Tina’s face.
-You have a beautiful smile, you know?
-So I’m told. A Bette does not like the idea much.
-If?
– By the way, I think we deserve a different beginning …… Tina stands up
and extends one of her hands. Bette looks like I was crazy.
Go-go! Let’s do this properly! As it should be!. Bette decides to play along.
-Hello …. Let me buy you a beer, of course if you’re waiting for someone.
Bette looks at her watch pretends thought the answer.
-In fact … I think my date stood me up, so I’m free and if you accept that
beer.
-Tina Kennard. Offer his hand again. This time Bette close.
-Bette Porter.
-You come very often?
-Whenever I can, this bar belongs to my sister. So I spend free time here. Now
before you came?
-Note that no …. It’s my first time … but I think this place is going to
like a lot …. Bette Tina stares.
-You think?
-Absolutely safe.
The waitress arrives with beer mugs
‘Because this new feeling …. Last.
-Drink to that. Tina says. Both women are given a sip of her beer.
-What made you…..?
I do not know …. Maybe all that talk in surgery …
And we talked about exactly? Because to be honest I do not
remember much of the time in the operating room.
‘It’s normal, one of the side effects of anesthesia is to create gaps in
memory, so it is only natural that a lot of what you said you do not remember.
And that’s what I said.
– I think the question should not be said. Bette decides to play a little with
Tina.
-Oh my god! That’s what I said …..
Well not much … in fact … I think it was the most honest you could be under
the circumstances.
-Oh my god! Bette tell me … Tell me what I said to this point ….. Tina is
really scared.
-Oh … Quiet … just tell me you wore two years without sex.
-Oh my god. Tina’s skin began to turn on a light pink to intense red.
Do not worry …. We all can happen ….
– Why are you alone?
-Because maybe I have not found the one. Maybe I expect too much of a
relationship. And because you own?
I’m not alone …. Watch Tina before this can change …. I .. I must tell you
I’m married. And if you get up and go running I’ll understand. My wife has
cancer. So with that statement both women began to treat more serious matters.
Bette told her that after nearly 15 years of marriage one day by accident
discovered that her wife had breast cancer, they did their best to fight it,
until one day they discovered that the cancer had metastasized and was only a
matter all flow. Meanwhile Tina commented on her failed relationship of three
years. Her parner decide left the country because in the company where she worked was
offered the division lead in trying to open a Caribbean country. So she did not
think that Tina was agree and assumed
that Tina would go with it. They tried to keep their relationship away. But one
day on one of the trips Tina came without warning and just discovered that
there were three in the relationship. They went on to share views on the
economic crisis, discussed politics. And so the evening gave way to night. When
time mercilessly with all mortals are forced to retreat. Bette Tina Company to
her car. While Tina unexpectedly fired without leaning and steals a kiss.
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(19 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
That was great and love it, please post more, thanks!
Thank you for sharing your story with us; I gave it 5 stars for the effort. However, I find it extremely disturbing that Bette is actually flirting (and I assume, contemplating an affair) with another woman (a patient, too, no less) when her wife is currently dying of cancer. It doesn’t matter anymore if her marriage has been rotten or her wife has been particularly horrible to her. It just seems all sorts of wrong to me that she should be doing this to her dying wife. There are heartless people out there, but they’re not the Bette and Tina that I know from the show. To each her own I suppose. Thank you for posting.
I think the plot behind your story could be a good one, however the language is still a barrier, therefore, maybe the story is not coming right as you intended, plus, trying to understand what you wrote every 4 words, takes the fun out of reading it.
I’m not sure what your native language but I’d gladly help you with American/English if you’d like. I feel that it’s unfair to give negative feedback when you are sharing something from your heart. Thank you for this and if I can help maybe someone who speaks your language and translate into English for you, and reading this as well can help. Great drama, it gets my blood boiling and I kind of like it 😃👍