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Heartbroken
Hey, how are you?
-A little groggy
‘I happen … a third voice says
Tina shakes her head toward the sound of the voice.
-Doctor … and stay the operation.
Rest assured-
‘Really ….
-You doubt me …? You’ll feel a little itchy as you go eliminating the
anesthetic of your nervous system. We use a local anesthetic combined with a
sedative morphine based on what causes dry, and water supply will pass as the
effect will be high. While talking to the surgeon will be reviewing the pupils
of Tina, with stethoscope listening to Tina’s heart rate.
– And no excessive movements, we do not want to spoil this surgery.
– Do not worry I’ll take care doctor. Helena says.
– Well then … as I recall …. Just out of the room and the doctor stops in a
whispering voice says.
I hope your call …. As promised. Without another word withdrew.
Helena and Tina look surprised.
-Am I dreaming or she told me …..
-Tina … happened … in that surgery …
I do not know … I have only vague memories …. Since they could not completely
asleep all began to speak … of relationships, life … no ….
-God flirting in an operating room! Kennard God … you have no respect! As you
have not!
-Helena! No! As you think! I’m not a women-eater!
-So that was that ….
-I honestly do not know ….
And that’s what you do, you’re going to call it like you promised?
I do not know …. And frankly right now I want to sleep.
-Rest … so faster will eliminate the effects of anesthesia.
A few days later …..
Bette is sitting at the table of The Planet, a bar owned by her sister, where
she sits can see through the glasses who comes and who goes, it feels a little
anxious, half an hour ago that his appointment was due to reach .
Outside the bar, Christina Kennard is torn between doubt whether it is right to
enter the appointment you have with Dr. Porter, without thinking more out of
his car and briskly enters the Bar since entering saw this having a beer .
Doctor really is a beautiful, curly black hair that skin tan, has a commanding
personality, moving quickly glanced around the bar can see that she is still
striking outside causing all the hype, this Doctor typing on his blackberry
outside looks of interest generated among bar girls. Tina deep breath to calm her
nerves and is steadily approaching its destination.
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(19 votes, average: 3.32 out of 5)
That was great and love it, please post more, thanks!
Thank you for sharing your story with us; I gave it 5 stars for the effort. However, I find it extremely disturbing that Bette is actually flirting (and I assume, contemplating an affair) with another woman (a patient, too, no less) when her wife is currently dying of cancer. It doesn’t matter anymore if her marriage has been rotten or her wife has been particularly horrible to her. It just seems all sorts of wrong to me that she should be doing this to her dying wife. There are heartless people out there, but they’re not the Bette and Tina that I know from the show. To each her own I suppose. Thank you for posting.
I think the plot behind your story could be a good one, however the language is still a barrier, therefore, maybe the story is not coming right as you intended, plus, trying to understand what you wrote every 4 words, takes the fun out of reading it.
I’m not sure what your native language but I’d gladly help you with American/English if you’d like. I feel that it’s unfair to give negative feedback when you are sharing something from your heart. Thank you for this and if I can help maybe someone who speaks your language and translate into English for you, and reading this as well can help. Great drama, it gets my blood boiling and I kind of like it 😃👍