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“And you’re nothing like what I’m used to. You listen, you care, you’re there whenever I need you to be. You took away my pain.” The brunette spoke softly and laid both of her palms on her lover’s thighs. “I mean literally, you took away my pain, it was… quite painful.” Her smile became playful as she gestured down to her body, where it disappeared under Tina.
Shoving slightly on the lean shoulder, the blonde couldn’t help bursting into another fit of giggle. She loved Bette for so many reasons. A stereotypical Alpha she seemed, strong and dominant, successful and sophisticated, but also so caring, loving, gentle, with a great sense of humor, what’s not to love? “I’m yours now.” She said, nuzzling to the warm embrace.
“And I’m yours too.”
It was such a strange thing to hear from an Alpha. They rarely mate for life, at least what her mother used to say about her father.
“I know it sounds weird. But I happen to be one of those who believe in monogamy, and gender equality.”
“Mmm an activist too.” Tina teased, “When did you decide that? You’re the one always talking about order and hierarchy.”
“Just now. Just for you.” Bette batted her lashes to make her best puppy eyes. “Though I’m still a little pissy that we didn’t get our first kiss much earlier.”
Purring, Tina dived in to shut her up by peppering much more kisses on the slightly bruised lips. Soon she lost her control in the deep connection she felt and started to massage Bette’s bra-clad breasts. It earned her a guttural moan from the woman lying on her back.
The brunette arched slightly off the bunk, her hips bumping into the Omega’s pubic bone along the movement. “Wait wait wait,” suddenly remembering where they were, Bette captured the slender wrists and held the excited blonde still, “We can’t get too aroused again. It’s almost morning. Let’s wait for bail.”
“Ok.” Tina pouted but listened. Her mind telling her it was the rational thing to do, yet her body saying otherwise. She wiggled on top of the brunette and screwed her brows together, “We’re still tied. And you feel really good.”
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The ones that are still here. Thank you.
Like I said, I wanted to share this interesting thing I’ve found. So here it is.
Sorry not sorry. *blushing face in palms and run away*
Robyn
I’ve never heard of the 100 but this story…whew! I too am *blushing face in palms* I came across this before work and I didn’t get anything done. Had to come home to re-read it. Really enjoyed it. Fresh, new…breath of fresh hair. Did I mention HOT!!!!!
ROBYNTIBETTER u really did this story beautifully,not only the characters but how they came to be at this point in time.AS a reader i have thoroughly enjoyed reading this new concept of yours,so yes u got my vote please continue with this story.thanks for sharing.pps
I must say it was something different. I enjoyed it and as always your writings are well done. Thanks
Fuck ! Sorry but that was incredible, so fucking hot.
Didn’t know what to expect but it was incredible. Loved that you used Bette&Tina as your Alpha and Omega. Like dunnthat said, please continu.
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Wow again! I had to take a little water
in the previous chapter, my God! It was a great trip.
I loved this story, you took me level
story that had not even thought to read, and I
Love NC 17, and this was very different and very well written.
I confess, I loved this your new job, please Roby
we need more.
And an amazing story !!
I did not feel offended by any Roby time.
Congratulations my friend.
A bear hug.
The entire constellation.
Note: But Chapters !!!!!! :):):):):)
FarOut cool story ! Read all 3 in a row! Surprisingly enjoyably different!
I’m sorry I only just got there to read the full story.
I really liked! I always liked the stories of other types of Tibette. and it was particularly good and interesting!
Thank you a lot of work into this story, very worth it!
I can’t say I’m amazed because it would be an understatement, so I will just *clap my hands* and say BRAVO!!!
You did a great job with their love scene, and the dialogue that explained their feelings and their first meeting. The description of their touching, and lovemaking was intimate and tender and hot in all the right places. I loved the twist when we suddenly realized they were in jail. That was a good moment to punctuate the action! Your writing has really gotten tighter, and better and better since I last read your stories. Congratulations!
Out of your thousand plus, plus words my only, only comment to ask you to consider writing-wise is when I find descriptions such as, snickered and chuckled in dialogue tags and descriptions with these two grown women those sound descriptions pop me completely out of the story. One, because they seem out of character, and two I don’t see them relaying their amusements in those ways. To me, kids or addled people trying to get away with something ‘snicker’, and old men, or men in general chuckle, but not sophisticated women.
And Congratulations on an imaginative, interesting story! Blackbird
**Taps Microphone**
“Hello? Is this thing on?”
Yes…I’m just reading this in 2020. This story was amazing. I have never heard anything about this alternate universe, but your writing was captivating. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.