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“Ok Shane, what are you doing?” Dana was out of the context as her usual self.
Alice also commented, “yeah, you’re being creepy.”
“I’m not the one who’s creepy.” Shane rolled her eyes. “You don’t stink as much,” she turned to Bette, and gave her another whiff, “something…changed.” Truly, Bette was a stronger Alpha than her, which usually meant that her scent was heavier and more competitive, but now she mellowed down, the musk mingled with something very very sweet. Then her eyes went big as bells, “Did you knot someone?!”
This spiked Alice’s interest, she practically lunged at the taller brunette, “Oh my god! Casanova is right! And it’s an Omega too!” A sly smile took over her face like a cat who stole a fish, “which lucky little Omega in there got to tame the big bad dawg?”
“Alice!” Dana scolded at her annoying drawl, she threw a worried look over to their new friend. Tina had always held a torch for the brunette, which had been pretty clear to all of them except Bette. She anticipated a heartbroken look, but instead, she found the blonde observing this exchange with an easy smile. “Wait… what’s up with you?” She leaned closer.
Just before Dana could touch a finger on the Omega, Bette snapped. If she could bark, she would. Stepping in between her nosy friend and her lover, she hunched her back in reflex.
Tina immediately put a hand on the strong waist, “Hey, hey, calm down. It’s ok.”
All their friends watched this scene unfold in astonishment, mouths agape.
“You… and you…” Alice looked back and forth in between the pair, and caught the two holding hands. “It’s real!” She squeaked as if she made the biggest discovery in history.
Shane was her laid back self despite her surprise. “Wow, congrats guys.” She held up her palms, indicating that she had no intention fighting for the Omega with Bette.
Dana grinned like a fool.
On the drive back to town, Tina admitted that she forgot to take her suppressant pills with her, hence the bar fight, hence being locked up with Bette during heat, hence the two finally acknowledged the mutual attraction.
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The ones that are still here. Thank you.
Like I said, I wanted to share this interesting thing I’ve found. So here it is.
Sorry not sorry. *blushing face in palms and run away*
Robyn
I’ve never heard of the 100 but this story…whew! I too am *blushing face in palms* I came across this before work and I didn’t get anything done. Had to come home to re-read it. Really enjoyed it. Fresh, new…breath of fresh hair. Did I mention HOT!!!!!
ROBYNTIBETTER u really did this story beautifully,not only the characters but how they came to be at this point in time.AS a reader i have thoroughly enjoyed reading this new concept of yours,so yes u got my vote please continue with this story.thanks for sharing.pps
I must say it was something different. I enjoyed it and as always your writings are well done. Thanks
Fuck ! Sorry but that was incredible, so fucking hot.
Didn’t know what to expect but it was incredible. Loved that you used Bette&Tina as your Alpha and Omega. Like dunnthat said, please continu.
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Wow again! I had to take a little water
in the previous chapter, my God! It was a great trip.
I loved this story, you took me level
story that had not even thought to read, and I
Love NC 17, and this was very different and very well written.
I confess, I loved this your new job, please Roby
we need more.
And an amazing story !!
I did not feel offended by any Roby time.
Congratulations my friend.
A bear hug.
The entire constellation.
Note: But Chapters !!!!!! :):):):):)
FarOut cool story ! Read all 3 in a row! Surprisingly enjoyably different!
I’m sorry I only just got there to read the full story.
I really liked! I always liked the stories of other types of Tibette. and it was particularly good and interesting!
Thank you a lot of work into this story, very worth it!
I can’t say I’m amazed because it would be an understatement, so I will just *clap my hands* and say BRAVO!!!
You did a great job with their love scene, and the dialogue that explained their feelings and their first meeting. The description of their touching, and lovemaking was intimate and tender and hot in all the right places. I loved the twist when we suddenly realized they were in jail. That was a good moment to punctuate the action! Your writing has really gotten tighter, and better and better since I last read your stories. Congratulations!
Out of your thousand plus, plus words my only, only comment to ask you to consider writing-wise is when I find descriptions such as, snickered and chuckled in dialogue tags and descriptions with these two grown women those sound descriptions pop me completely out of the story. One, because they seem out of character, and two I don’t see them relaying their amusements in those ways. To me, kids or addled people trying to get away with something ‘snicker’, and old men, or men in general chuckle, but not sophisticated women.
And Congratulations on an imaginative, interesting story! Blackbird
**Taps Microphone**
“Hello? Is this thing on?”
Yes…I’m just reading this in 2020. This story was amazing. I have never heard anything about this alternate universe, but your writing was captivating. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.