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“Let me try again.” Bette whispered, and rolling themselves again so she could get a proper footing. Her knot had diminished to a less intimidating size and the pulsing had ceased. Although still sensitive, Bette was able to move herself without getting too worked up. She gently backed out, not without a bit of struggle.
Tina watched the length lustfully. It was covered in the glistening combination of wetness they created together. More came streaming out from her folds and rushed down their thighs.
“Ah… I made a mess.” Bette looked everywhere for paper towel or tissues, but there was none. She rolled her eyes and picked up her tank top, wiping herself first, then gently cleaned her lover. Quick to discard the dirty fabric, she pulled on her leather jacked over the bra.
“You don’t own brief shorts?” Tina eyed the brunette suspiciously as she closed her pants over the half softened shaft. It left a slight bulge, but she utterly enjoyed the view.
Bette chuckled, and went to help her lover adjust her top wear, covering as much skin as she could manage. Just then her possessive instinct began to show.
They sat on the bunk after getting themselves presentable, and spent the rest of the night cuddling and talking. Bette loved to make Tina laugh, it gave her a sense of accomplishment that made her other achievements pale in comparison. Tina saw how much Bette enjoyed physical contact, purring once in a while to her caress. Of course the Alpha would deny that, so she indulged the small pleasure without saying anything.
Morning came soon, and they were informed that their friends had come to give them a lift home. In line to check out, Bette encountered the redhead challenger again. She shielded Tina behind her and gave the other Alpha a warning hiss.
The redhead backed down immediately, which was an interesting observation for Officer Larson. He didn’t investigate further, thanking the lord for bringing peace and order in his precinct.
Alice, Dana and Shane had come to their rescue. The skinny brunette was first to sense something different. She sniffed at Bette’s jacket and then her hair, and backed away an inch to inspect her overly attire.
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The ones that are still here. Thank you.
Like I said, I wanted to share this interesting thing I’ve found. So here it is.
Sorry not sorry. *blushing face in palms and run away*
Robyn
I’ve never heard of the 100 but this story…whew! I too am *blushing face in palms* I came across this before work and I didn’t get anything done. Had to come home to re-read it. Really enjoyed it. Fresh, new…breath of fresh hair. Did I mention HOT!!!!!
ROBYNTIBETTER u really did this story beautifully,not only the characters but how they came to be at this point in time.AS a reader i have thoroughly enjoyed reading this new concept of yours,so yes u got my vote please continue with this story.thanks for sharing.pps
I must say it was something different. I enjoyed it and as always your writings are well done. Thanks
Fuck ! Sorry but that was incredible, so fucking hot.
Didn’t know what to expect but it was incredible. Loved that you used Bette&Tina as your Alpha and Omega. Like dunnthat said, please continu.
Thank you for sharing this with us!
Wow again! I had to take a little water
in the previous chapter, my God! It was a great trip.
I loved this story, you took me level
story that had not even thought to read, and I
Love NC 17, and this was very different and very well written.
I confess, I loved this your new job, please Roby
we need more.
And an amazing story !!
I did not feel offended by any Roby time.
Congratulations my friend.
A bear hug.
The entire constellation.
Note: But Chapters !!!!!! :):):):):)
FarOut cool story ! Read all 3 in a row! Surprisingly enjoyably different!
I’m sorry I only just got there to read the full story.
I really liked! I always liked the stories of other types of Tibette. and it was particularly good and interesting!
Thank you a lot of work into this story, very worth it!
I can’t say I’m amazed because it would be an understatement, so I will just *clap my hands* and say BRAVO!!!
You did a great job with their love scene, and the dialogue that explained their feelings and their first meeting. The description of their touching, and lovemaking was intimate and tender and hot in all the right places. I loved the twist when we suddenly realized they were in jail. That was a good moment to punctuate the action! Your writing has really gotten tighter, and better and better since I last read your stories. Congratulations!
Out of your thousand plus, plus words my only, only comment to ask you to consider writing-wise is when I find descriptions such as, snickered and chuckled in dialogue tags and descriptions with these two grown women those sound descriptions pop me completely out of the story. One, because they seem out of character, and two I don’t see them relaying their amusements in those ways. To me, kids or addled people trying to get away with something ‘snicker’, and old men, or men in general chuckle, but not sophisticated women.
And Congratulations on an imaginative, interesting story! Blackbird
**Taps Microphone**
“Hello? Is this thing on?”
Yes…I’m just reading this in 2020. This story was amazing. I have never heard anything about this alternate universe, but your writing was captivating. Thanks so much for sharing your talent.