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Her hands
Story written on June 17, 2011 by kins40.
This is not what it was all about.
She took my hand again and showed me the way to the bathroom. Candlelight was the only source of lighting in the small usually clinical looking space. The bath was drawn and the foam of the bubble bath was shimmering in the flickering of the candles. The room smelt of lavender oil. The setting was very peaceful.
I turned to the woman of my life but she stopped me from saying anything by placing her index finger on my lips. She motioned to the bathtub where I allowed myself to be submerged in the warm water.
She began by washing my hair slowly taking her time to lather the shampoo into my thick curls. She rinsed it off and applied some conditioner which she left in intentionally.
I saw her reaching for a towel which she rolled up and placed below my neck as she asked me to recline fully in the tub.
She leaned in and kissed me softly on the lips before kneeling behind me at the head of the bath.
She brought her hands to my temples and started a small gentle circular motion with her fingertips applying just the right amount of pressure.
The surge of wellbeing which immediately took me over made me close my eyes instantly.
Very subtly and without ever breaking contact, she altered her actions by softly stroking my scalp repetitively from the hairline all the way around the contour of my head. Her fingers were light and gentle in a careful appeasing gesture like a mother would caress the head of her newborn.
Her fingers then spread and the stroking action became a firmer but yet gently controlled kneading one over the whole surface of my scalp as her fingertips glided inch by inch until they reached the nape of my neck.
I felt totally immersed in peace and tranquility. My only quiet distraction came from Tina’s gentle breathing and the sporadic light swishing of the bath water.
Her fingers were now running carefully through the length of my hair smoothing it away from my face, in a slow, patient combing action.
I felt her separating small strands of hair as she did so and she began the oddest and yet incredibly soothing move. She tugged gently on each strand as she once again treated the entirety of my scalp to the same motion. The headache which had taken ownership of my brain for most of the day disappeared almost instantly.
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Very well written! Thank you!
Am I first?… Well, aren’t I your nb 1 fan anyway? All I can say is… AMAZING!! Would it be silly to say that I almost felt that scalp massage? And god knows I LOOOOVE scalp massages!!!… Who doesn’t? You know that already, bud god do I love your writing!!… That was beautiful, and that’s the understatement of the year! You just demonstrated how magic and powerful hands can be! Oh, and what a beautiful tribute to champagne as well! You wrote it wonderfully!! Bravo my friend, amazing one-off!… But to be honest, I never really had a doubt… ;) Thanks!
Lovely!
That was absolutely exquisite! Thank you so much for this incredibly tender story.
My lovely Kins, you have been gone too long. I want a reply lol. I was wondering if you cared to co-write with me? I have been scared to ask :/ that’s why it’s not in your PM. Awesomely beautiful. I want her hands on me. Forget eyes are the window to the soul, our hands are the depth to our undying love. Caramel x
you are an excellent writer, simply amazing. I love it!
Simply beautiful.
Brava!
Wow!…That was extraordinary. Wonderful, wonderful job!
Kins40 – Amazingly beautiful. I really love how you keep the beauty, respect and gracefulness of these two lovers especially in their most intimate moments. Glad you came back with a new one as you are one of a few that keep me here.
Hi Kins40! :-) What a nice surprise to see your posting! Immediately read it and oh boy!… Must savor every bit of it as it was so deep in details and real!! And how do you do that?! :-p it’s “only” about hands some more! … ;-) thanks for beautiful writing for the weekend :-)
Thank you for this fabulous description of Tibette’s happinessf rom the moment they met to Angelica’s birth.You have your way with words which I admire and envie. Thank you for this beautifultibute to our most famous couple. Thank you.
Wow. I am blown away by the measure of your talent. That was an amazing story.
Amazing!
AWESOME, LOVE IT
So beautifully written, thank you!
Yay, you’re back! The love, tenderness and the emotional connection the two women share, you captured it all. You do know how awesome you are? Please write a story for each of your other top four of the most satisfying actions. Pretty please?
beautiful words from an excellent writer… simply amazing(-:
A wonderfully written story. So beautiful and i could just picture every scene. thank you for this story. Lovely so lovely.
Excellent.Thank you.
So, so beautiful.
Hands are my soft point too. As well as Veuve Cliquot. Wonderful!
That was the most beautiful thing I have read in a long time. Thanks!
Kins40, that was extraordinarily exquisite. you gave us almost their entire lives in five pages. They were the most beautiful, loving, gentle, intimate, respectful and sensuous descriptions of a lovers hands I’ve ever read anywhere. You do have a way with words. There were very few words spoken by either of them, yet you gave us what it was all about in the description, “LOVE,” almighty love and understanding of the love shared by two deeply connected people that doesn’t require words to convey the love shared between them, just that very special touch that says everything. Without a word of abuse, degradation, s&m, bdsm, not even anything that could be construed as nc-17, yet you gave us everything that we needed to know by just describing how much they loved and cared for one another almost without saying a word. Thanks so much for bringing us this very beautifully loving story.
OMG..you put so many emotion..and feelings..as simple as a hand… Amazing!…do write again kins40. :)….
Amazing writing, I loved it. So, this is the Hand, what about the other 4? ;D thank u :)
simply nice and elegant
congratulations for this excellent story
A very nicely written single chapter.. Thank you.