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Hidden Secrets pt 9
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"yes.. we did everything you asked" Jenny replied, her smile brighter then ever…
"and Carmen" Shane asked… wondering how they managed to keep her from coming with them…
"Shes at home, i told her to be ready by 6 and to dress casual." Alice said as she started the car…
"you nervous"
"ya.."
"don’t be, after everything you told me, shes gonna love this.." Jenny said as the small car pulled out into traffic and down the street..
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A hour later.. Shane stood outside the studio wearing a pair of everyday jeans… her usual men’s shirt and blazer.. she took a deep breath and knocked on the door… she chuckled when she heard Carmen yell "just a sec" fallowed by the noise of someone running around.. a moment later the door flung open and Shane forgot how to breath… her eyes slowly tracing every inch of Carmen’s body… Carmen stood in the doorway, wearing her trademark tight jeans and a tight fitting tank top underneath an unbuttoned blouse..
"hey sexy.." Carmen said breaking Shane from her hungry trans..
"oh hey… you look great.." she stated breathlessly… she looked down at her converses feeling slightly embarrassed and could feel the color rising to her cheeks…
"thank you.." Carmen whispered seductively and took a step forward… lifting Shane’s head up and placing a soft but passionate kiss on her lips.. "so…. where are you taking me" she asked pulling away but keeping her arms around Shane’s neck..
"mm mm… its a…. surprise." she said in between kisses… "ready" she asked…
"ya…" Carmen said letting go of Shane and shutting the door to her studio.. "lets go." she said fallowing Shane to her jeep…
"hold it" a voice said from behind.. they both spun around to find the entire framily, standing on the porch..
"omg what now" Shane asked no one in particular… she should have known…
"hey guys, whats up" Carmen said with a small laugh..
"we just wanted to see you off.."Bette said smiling at the two…
"ya its not everyday, we get to see you go on a date.." Alice stated matter-of-factly.. the others nodded in full agreement…
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Very sweet :) Shane adorable like always..and Carmen just melt lol. Post soon!.
aaaaawwwwwwwww thats all a can say lol… really sweet . i love them
Very sweet and Shane is so shy.but with Carman she opens up a wee bit more thanks
Sweetness, Baby . . . pure sweetness!!! Ya’ gotta’ continue like now cause I want more like NOW! LMFAO!! Whelp, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE, Babe!!! . . . . . . . Stank, da one and only, chicka =D
Aww….This is so sweet I can feel my teeth rotting…lmao. I loved it. You have me salivating for the next chapter. By the way, for future posting ‘fallowing’ is a word used in agriculture to mean ‘plowing and leaving land unseeded’. I think the word you want is ‘following’ which means in context ‘to come after or pursue’.Other than that, I loved the way you tied Shane’s back-story in the date and it helped to bring her closer to Carmen(if that’s possible). It’s also very believable circa season three, before the wedding fiasco. Oh and Alice is priceless! Like I said, I’m waiting for the next part…do I smell an NC17 coming?
awwwwwwwwww omg i loved that update . shane is soooooooo sweet and she is giving herself to her carmen omg please continue this fic is amazing and i love how in love they are this is great you made my night.