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Hidden Secrets pt 9
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"OK so you’ve seen us can we go.." Shane pleaded… causing Carmen to laugh…
"um."jenny started pulling out a camera and snapping a photo before Shane could protest.. "yes"
Shane groaned and lightly pulled Carmen away from their friend… "bye guys" Carmen yelled over her shoulder as they pulled out of the driveway… ___________________________________________________________________
Carmen didn’t have long to daydream about where Shane was taking her.. She had to take a double look at the surroundings before she realized they had pulled up to the same cliff, Shane had run too.. taking a better look around she noticed how enchanting the surrounding were and then turned to Shane for an explanation…
Shane saw the look and exited the jeep grabbing a small cooler out of the backseat.. "i thought you might like to have a picnic" she stated simply before opening Carmen’s door…
Carmen nodded and exited the jeep, but remained silent for a moment… enjoying the peaceful silence that surrounded the small area.. it was rare in west Hollywood to find a place not surrounded by constant noise… "this place is amazing"
"ya… its.. um.. i use to come here when i was a kid… when things got ruff, i could come here and look out at the ocean and suddenly my problems would disappear.."Shane said honestly, as she laid out a blanket and began to pull the food out of the cooler..
"thank you"Carmen said dropping to her knees on the blanket.. and taking one of Shane’s hands…
"for what?" Shane asked genuinely confused…
"for bringing me here and sharing that with me…" her smile growing…
Shane waved it off as if it was nothing but the smile on her face wouldn’t go away,, "so… are you hungry.." she asked waving her hand at the food…
"ya… how did…"
"i didn’t… the girls did…" Shane cut in…
"oh… so that’s what they were hiding from me.." she said with a slight chuckle..
"ya… i told them not to tell you… sorry"
"well.. " Carmen started contemplating "your forgiven.." she said leaning against Shane as they sat and watched the sunset over the ocean…
For over an hour they sat in comfortable silence, eating and star gazing… occasionally losing themselves in a torturous kiss… neither felt the need to talk… it was peaceful, no words were needed to fill in the gaps… and Shane was a naturally quite person so Carmen didn’t mind… she was truly happy just to being here with Shane…
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Very sweet :) Shane adorable like always..and Carmen just melt lol. Post soon!.
aaaaawwwwwwwww thats all a can say lol… really sweet . i love them
Very sweet and Shane is so shy.but with Carman she opens up a wee bit more thanks
Sweetness, Baby . . . pure sweetness!!! Ya’ gotta’ continue like now cause I want more like NOW! LMFAO!! Whelp, like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE, Babe!!! . . . . . . . Stank, da one and only, chicka =D
Aww….This is so sweet I can feel my teeth rotting…lmao. I loved it. You have me salivating for the next chapter. By the way, for future posting ‘fallowing’ is a word used in agriculture to mean ‘plowing and leaving land unseeded’. I think the word you want is ‘following’ which means in context ‘to come after or pursue’.Other than that, I loved the way you tied Shane’s back-story in the date and it helped to bring her closer to Carmen(if that’s possible). It’s also very believable circa season three, before the wedding fiasco. Oh and Alice is priceless! Like I said, I’m waiting for the next part…do I smell an NC17 coming?
awwwwwwwwww omg i loved that update . shane is soooooooo sweet and she is giving herself to her carmen omg please continue this fic is amazing and i love how in love they are this is great you made my night.