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Hold On – chapter 3
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Dana stopped in her tracks when she felt soft fingers gently wrap
around her arm. When she turned around to face the blonde, she was
greeted by a confident smile.
”First of all, you haven’t even told me your name. I mean, you come
barging into my life with a map in my face, the least you could do is
tell me your name.” She gave the other girl a cocky look, hoping she’ll
bite. There was just something about the girl’s presence that did
something to Alice. Just the simplest contact with Dana sent goose
bumps dancing up her arm.
Dana smiled and found herself lowering her eyes past the blonde’s
shoulders again! She quickly corrected her mistake and moved her eyes
to look anywhere but at the girl in front of her. Alice, taking her
silence for shyness, decided she may as well take the lead.
“My name’s Alice.” She held her hand out to the brunette. The silky
feel of the girl’s fingers surprised Alice. She’d half expected them to
feel rough and calloused. So much for judging a book by its cover!
“Oh …um, Dana.” She replied once she eventually remembered that she was supposed to take Alice’s hand and shake it.
Alice couldn’t hide the amusement in her voice. ‘Well, it’s nice to
meet you Dana.” Again with that smile! “Well, we don’t want you to be
late for your appointment the first day, now do we?” She raised her
hand so they could both read the time on her wristwatch.
Dana had to fight every urge of her well-trained reflexes from glancing
at Alice’s ***** as they danced ever so slightly when she moved her
hand. They seemed to say, “Here, look at me! I can tell you the time.”
Dana cocked an eyebrow that challenged, “oh yeah? Tell me then, smarty-boobies, what time is it?”
“3 o’clock.”
“Huh. What?” Dana was surprised. She hoped to god Alice hadn’t heard her secret conversation.
“3 o’clock, Dane. Your appointment??” Alice tried to remind her and
started to lead her inside a building. She had no idea why the girl had
seemed to space out, but she couldn’t help but notice the pointed stare
Dana had been giving her *****. Though she hadn’t quite decided in
her head what team Dana must be playing for, Alice was bisexual and the
beauty of that was she could cheer for any team she wanted to. So,
Alice decided she’d start with a little tease.
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Finally you post, thanks. I love this story, and I hope no much drama and more fun :P
Now it’s my turn to read your story. Only I read all the chapters. LOL Love this pre-L Word story, it different, but I can totally see it happening seeing how we know nothing about how Alice and Dana met. Looking foward to the next chapter, which I will read. I’m not smart enough to be able to skip a chapter and keep up LOL. Deb
I love it this just gets better and better with each and every post so please post soon can’t wait to see what happens
I love it…I think it’s cute and fun!! Post soon cause I can’t wait to see what happens between Mel C and Smarty-Boobies!!!
You put small details from the first 2 seasons of TLW and use them in this alternate universe. So cute!!! I missed the goofy and inexperienced Dana along with confidence, player Alice and I think this story definitely promises us those characters.Very well done!
hey, yeah i just started my 1st year at uni so i’ve been pretty busy recently. dont worry though i still read/love all of your stories :D great chapter too!
Sorry it’s taken me ages to post, I’ve been re-reading fics, when you gonna update Rach, I’m loving this too much for you not to! xx
Awww this is so cute and fun, I’m loving it. Thanks =)
this is so fun. i love that heather is randomly in it. great job. i am excited for the next part.
Great stuff…I *realize* that the lesbian community are very interlinked…*roflmao* I can’t wait for the next installment
I love the reference to Dana imagining Alice’s boobs talking to her! LOL! And she called them “smarty-boobs” – that rocked! :)
I hope you post more soon!
I’ve been waiting for you lol. I love Dana the Horndog and great idea including Heather in the story. Loving this funny, witty fic. BTW, Mel C winked at me.