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Hold On – chapter 3
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“Please tell me you actually do have an appointment. Or is it the
latest pickup line you girls are going for these days?” She turned to
smile playfully at Dana, but was greeted with a scowl. Alice had hit a
nerve.
Dana quickly opened her mouth to reply but a faint, high-pitched squeak was all that came up.
Never one to pass up being on a girl’s good side, especially one so hot! So Alice tried to fix what she said.
“Relax! It was a joke, Dane. You know, funny-ha-ha?” The brunette
smiled at the nickname, which Alice took as a good sign. “Come on, I’ll
show you where the sports centre is. I’m headed in that direction
anyway.”
They turned onto one of the paths that wound around the different
buildings on campus. They had barely walked five minutes when they
heard someone calling after Alice from behind them.
“Al… Alice! Wait up.”
The two women turned around to see who it was. Once she got close
enough to be recognizable, Alice’s face brightened. For some reason,
Dana found herself being jealous and out of place now that this other
person had come along to take away the attention of the blonde.
“Hey, Heather! How’s it hangin’, girl?” The girl named Heather sidled up on Alice’s right and walked alongside her.
“Oh, I’m fine. It’s just, I heard word going around that…” she paused
effectively and stole a glance at Dana’s direction, making sure that
Alice saw it. “…you and the illustrious art gallerist have broken
things off. Hot off the press.” She winked pointedly at the blonde.
“*****! It hasn’t even been fifteen minutes. Word travels fast.” Alice
noted how uncomfortably Dana was standing. Three’s a crowd, indeed! For
once, she actually wished she hadn’t seen Heather. Why she’d pass on
her best friend to be alone with a stranger seemed only slightly off to
Alice.
“No kidding it travels fast! I tried to find you as fast as I could.
Are you alright? I mean, I never took that brunette for the butchy type
but you aren’t exactly ripped either, Al. Plus I’ve seen you with
Bette, she’s taller.” Heather babbled and suddenly started busying
herself with checking the parts of Alice’s body she could see to check
if all her limbs and body parts were present and accounted for.
“Mweh! Why do I have a feeling this sounds like a really bad case of
broken telephone.” The blonde dodged aside and clung to Dana’s arm when
Heather came up behind her while doing her “inspection”. Dana could
barely keep from laughing at the scene taking place in front of her.
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Finally you post, thanks. I love this story, and I hope no much drama and more fun :P
Now it’s my turn to read your story. Only I read all the chapters. LOL Love this pre-L Word story, it different, but I can totally see it happening seeing how we know nothing about how Alice and Dana met. Looking foward to the next chapter, which I will read. I’m not smart enough to be able to skip a chapter and keep up LOL. Deb
I love it this just gets better and better with each and every post so please post soon can’t wait to see what happens
I love it…I think it’s cute and fun!! Post soon cause I can’t wait to see what happens between Mel C and Smarty-Boobies!!!
You put small details from the first 2 seasons of TLW and use them in this alternate universe. So cute!!! I missed the goofy and inexperienced Dana along with confidence, player Alice and I think this story definitely promises us those characters.Very well done!
hey, yeah i just started my 1st year at uni so i’ve been pretty busy recently. dont worry though i still read/love all of your stories :D great chapter too!
Sorry it’s taken me ages to post, I’ve been re-reading fics, when you gonna update Rach, I’m loving this too much for you not to! xx
Awww this is so cute and fun, I’m loving it. Thanks =)
this is so fun. i love that heather is randomly in it. great job. i am excited for the next part.
Great stuff…I *realize* that the lesbian community are very interlinked…*roflmao* I can’t wait for the next installment
I love the reference to Dana imagining Alice’s boobs talking to her! LOL! And she called them “smarty-boobs” – that rocked! :)
I hope you post more soon!
I’ve been waiting for you lol. I love Dana the Horndog and great idea including Heather in the story. Loving this funny, witty fic. BTW, Mel C winked at me.