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Hold On – chapter 3
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“I gotta hand it to you though, you move fast.” Heather teased,
stealing another glance at Dana which, this time, the tennis player
caught. Alice was quick to shake her head and attempt to defend the
brunette’s privacy which she’d mistakenly offended only minutes before.
“Oh, um, Heather, this is Dana. It’s her first year in Berkeley and she got lost, so I’m just pointing her in the right direction.”
“Hah! Yeah, right.” It was clear from the tone in her voice that she
didn’t believe a word Alice said. “Whatever. Just make sure you’re at
the Grind tonight. The girls will wanna see you now that you’re back on
the market. Bring Mel C over here, too.” She winked at both of them and
turned to leave. Just before they got too far to hear her, she yelled
out, “Hey, Dana… if she starts going south, you better brace yourself.”
Unsure what the other girl meant with the comment exactly, Dana
continued to walk with Alice. She tried to recall everything that had
taken place in the last half hour since she got to campus. Getting
lost, witnessing Alice arguing with a taller brunette, meeting Alice,
meeting Heather. Certain words that Heather had said came back to her –
brunette, Bette, “she’s taller”. Then it dawned on her!
“Omigod! You were breaking up with her!” Dana blurted out and stopped
dead in her tracks. She’d completely forgotten to keep her initial
sighting of Alice a secret. Alice, who had taken a couple of steps
ahead, had to walk back to make sure she heard her right.
“What?! What the ***** are you talking about?”
“The brunette… in front of the library… with the keys? Heather said
she was taller and …not butchy. You were breaking up with a girl??”
Dana’s confusion and curiosity had totally won over. The thought that
Alice may not like to learn the fact that she was being watched didn’t
have a chance of crossing her mind.
Alice’s phone rang the tune to “I U She” by Peaches, letting her know
exactly who was calling. She flipped the cover open without looking at
the call display.
“Shane…” Alice looked at Dana as she listened to the caller speak to
her. Seeing the look on Dana’s face, Shane’s words did not process in
her mind. Then Dana’s words suddenly hit her!
Alice tried to pause her phone conversation in order to question Dana
further. “Shane, w-wait, hold on… Dana? How do you know that?”
TBC
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Finally you post, thanks. I love this story, and I hope no much drama and more fun :P
Now it’s my turn to read your story. Only I read all the chapters. LOL Love this pre-L Word story, it different, but I can totally see it happening seeing how we know nothing about how Alice and Dana met. Looking foward to the next chapter, which I will read. I’m not smart enough to be able to skip a chapter and keep up LOL. Deb
I love it this just gets better and better with each and every post so please post soon can’t wait to see what happens
I love it…I think it’s cute and fun!! Post soon cause I can’t wait to see what happens between Mel C and Smarty-Boobies!!!
You put small details from the first 2 seasons of TLW and use them in this alternate universe. So cute!!! I missed the goofy and inexperienced Dana along with confidence, player Alice and I think this story definitely promises us those characters.Very well done!
hey, yeah i just started my 1st year at uni so i’ve been pretty busy recently. dont worry though i still read/love all of your stories :D great chapter too!
Sorry it’s taken me ages to post, I’ve been re-reading fics, when you gonna update Rach, I’m loving this too much for you not to! xx
Awww this is so cute and fun, I’m loving it. Thanks =)
this is so fun. i love that heather is randomly in it. great job. i am excited for the next part.
Great stuff…I *realize* that the lesbian community are very interlinked…*roflmao* I can’t wait for the next installment
I love the reference to Dana imagining Alice’s boobs talking to her! LOL! And she called them “smarty-boobs” – that rocked! :)
I hope you post more soon!
I’ve been waiting for you lol. I love Dana the Horndog and great idea including Heather in the story. Loving this funny, witty fic. BTW, Mel C winked at me.