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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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“Ohhh god……B…ba…..babe……….don’t…stop.” Tina pleaded as Bette’s mouth made love to her girlfriend. She felt Tina’s hips buck up into her face, moments before she came hard. “Ohhhh..god…..goooooooodddddddd baaaaabbbyyyyyyy” Tina expressed, allowing the orgasm to rip through her body.
Bette laid her face against Tina’s thigh, catching her breath as the blonde tried to gain some level of composure.
“That was fucking amazing” Tina whispered as her breaths returned to normal. “I’m not sure I ever had an orgasm so strong in my life.”
Bette looked up at Tina and smiled. She licked her way up her lover, and settled her lips on Tina’s. Tina could taste herself on Bette’s mouth. She became even further stimulated when she understood the depth of that act. It wasn’t long before she rolled Bette onto her back, and began a journey of her own. For Bette, it wasn’t easy to give up some control, for she was one who loved it, and handled herself better than most when it came to lovemaking. However, this was Tina, and this was different. This woman had an effect on her like no other. Tina’s tongue played with the skin just under Bette’s ear before it tasted the skin on her neck, her sternum, and then ultimately to her breast. She pinched Bette’s nipple before taking it in her mouth and sucking on it, rolling it, biting it and pulling it away from her. Her fingers had already found Bette’s clit, and was moving slowly, in small circles as her mouth refused to find another part of Bette’s body, not just yet.
“Tee…….go south…….just go south.” Bette said impatiently, feeling her body become more and more tight with need.
Tina slide down Bette’s body, dragging her nails and tongue along her skin as she did so. She separated Bette’s lips and smiled at how wet her lover was. She circled Bette’s hole before sliding her tongue deep inside her.
“OHhhhhhh….goddddddd.” Bette shouted as Tina’s tongue filled her.
Tina reached up with her hand and started to massage Bette’s breast as her tongue moved up to Bette’s clit, sucking it lightly, her free hand finding the wet abyss that her tongue had just filled. As Tina kept a steady rhythm, Bette’s body grew in need, it tightened as it escalated and peaked before the orgasm took over.
“YESSSSSSSSSSS TEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE” she screemed in delight.
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In Burma, Alice has been in this hut for days with only food and water twice a day. The welts on her back were on fire. The whip that they beat her caused one of the welts to bleed. Her voice was gone from screaming and crying so much. At night was the worst. All the things they did to her kept happening again and again in her sleep. Some days she wished they would just kill her. But they derived too much pleasure from damn near drowning her, and making her watch other people beg for their life. One of the captors came in, grabbed her, took her out and sat her with the other people they had captured that day and lined all of them up with there hands tied behind their back. They started shooting them one by one. They fell. Alice was next. She felt the bullet enter her leg. She fell to the ground then she saw him over her head and felt the bullet enter her chest… then blackness.
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!