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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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“You are so beautiful” Tina whispered softly as she laid her naked torso against the grass. “So defined…..smooth……soft.”
Tina was mesmerized by Bette’s beauty, and Bette was feeling very much the same feelings about Tina as well.
“God I have wanted to make love to you for so long Tee.”
“I know baby. I want to feel you making love to me in the most provocative and sensual way imaginable.”
Bette leaned down and kissed Tina gently. As the kiss became more passionate, both women engaged their mouth’s with one another, the heat building in the center of their bodies. The throbs increased, demanding some form of a release which was no long and option anymore, but rather a requirement.
In a very short time, Bette and Tina had removed their pants and panties. The beauty of one another hit both of them even more, as they felt the skin of the other tantalize their own.
“You feel so soft.” Tina said as Bette slid her leg between Tina’s.
“Definitely not as soft as you.” Bette said before ascending her mouth to Tina’s breast. She circled it gently, lightly, taking her time to feel the hard nub swell even more as her tongue found it’s edge.
“MMmmm…godddd…..that feels soooo good Baby.” Tina expressed, as her body succumbed to Bette’s control. It had been such a long time since someone had made love to her. This certainly was that. This was about building a trust, a confidence, a feeling that went so deep and couldn’t be explained on the surface in the least. Bette dragged her fingers lightly down Tina’s abdomen until she found the part of this woman that held the privacy of her being. Bette knew full well, that in taking this step with the woman she loved, there would never be that ability to ever remove herself from this relationship easily. This was it. She was entering a part of this woman that was given only to those who she gave the privilege. Bette took her mouth from Tina’s nipple and dragged it down her body until she was between her legs. She lifted one of Tina’s legs, and placed it over her shoulder before bringing her mouth towards the blonde’s center. Within a very short amount of time, Bette had acquainted herself with Tina’s core and was doing things this blonde had never experienced at such a heightened level ever before.
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!