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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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I laid my head in Tina’s lap so I felt her and could see what she was talking about. Pointing to the left tell me that the one with the black wing and body with green neon spots was called The Malachite, the next one she pointed out looked like a Orange with blace trim it was named the orange Julia.
We both drifted off to sleep. Later I felt Tina kissing me wake.
“Hmmmmmmm what a nice wake up call…T, why did you let me sleep actually?”
“Bette I fell asleep too, so I seem to do that a lot around you, sleeping that is” Tina chuckled.
Tina offered me a tuna sandwich from the basket. We didn’t talk much, both just enjoying the moment, the silence. When we were finished, Tina told me to sit Indian style and face her.
“We’re going to play 1 thing you must know. I will go first. Love to swim. I was not a coach, I would be on the USA diving team. The second thing is I hate cereal even apple jacks. T yes cereal of any kind. The third one is I am a shoe freak, all kinds of shoes. I have 20 pairs of boots. The fourth one is The Bangles my grandmother gave to me as a girl I plan to give to my wife”
“Was she Hindu Tina?”
“Yes she was and she received them from my grandfather. The fifth thing is I want kids some day. The sixth thing is I would be lost without my cell phone. The seventh thing is I love to watch the Spanish soap operas. The eighth thing is I really have been wanting to do this all day”
She kissed me. We kissed for a minute.
“Tina I don’t want to stop this time. But I can If you want to I say with my body looming over her”
“Bette I want you so bad”
“Tina, this is so much more than us just fucking you know that right?”
“Y–yes I do”
“T, lay back and let me show you.”
As Tina laid back, she could feel the plush grass press against the skin that was exposed against the earth. She watched as Bette kneeled on both sides of her, removing her top and discarding it to the ground, showing the definitions of her well defined and chiselled body. She wore no bra, for she had not been graced with extremely large bosoms, and what she did have, was quite firm and tight. Tina stared at the beautiful body this brunette was revealing to her. She sat up slightly, enough to pull her own top off, with Bette offering a hand to assist.
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!