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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 8
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An awkward silence seemed to take over the room.
“I miss you Bette. How about we go out on a date tomorrow?” asked Candace.
“No Candace, I am seeing Tina.” Bette was quick to respond without a bit of hesitation.
“Is it serious yet?”
“Not yet, but I want it to be.” Bette admitted. “Besides, you wanted a break so deal with it”
Candace shot Bette a cold and glaring look.
Bette noticed a rather hot girl the dance floor. On her way to her, she bumped into the asshole, correction Glenn. When she did, her drink spilled on his shoes.
“Shit! That was a good drink,” Bette said annoyed more by the fact she lost some of her beverage, than the fact his shoes were now wreaking of alcohol.
"How is Tina?” He asked in a condescending manner.
"Better now that your gone" I replied smugly. “Now step off before I beat your ass”
Bette left him standing there while she made her way to the hot girl which was her initial target. When she arrived where she was, she tapped her lightly on her shoulder.
“Would you like to dance?” Bette asked.
“Sure…my name is Spencer”
“I am Bette”
They danced to ‘Rock Your Hips’ and all Bette could think of was how hot this girl was. She had flaming red hair, a size 8 killer body which screamed that she was dedicated to working out. When the song was over, Bette bought her a drink and they chatted a little more, before Spencer said she would have loved to dance more but had to be at work in an hour.
“I work at Magic City and my show is at 1am. It’s a must see. Perhaps I’ll see you there”
Spencer winked at Bette before leaving the club.
While Al was still dancing with the girl she met, Bette stepped into the restroom to call Tina.
“Hey T….what are you doing tonight?”
“Not much. Just hanging with Dylan…why?” Tina asked.
“Cause I want you to come to Magic City at 1am”
“What is that? Is it a club?” Tina asked a bit more curious.
“I’ll say this, if you do come you can redeem the coupon that I owe you” Bette said with a bit of flirtation present in her voice.
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Tylo…. That was Great. Very hot!!!!! I’m thinking the knock on the door is the chick that Bette danced with. I am not much of a baseball fan, a few years ago I liked the Braves because my brother made me watch all the games that he watched. Anyways, T the story was great but you left us hangin.
Looks lie you have kept everyone out of their beds lol im sitting with blury eyes cos im that tired but i think i forgot to comment on the last one, hmmm or did i ugggh cant remember so i had to make sure i defo commented this time well that was HOT i sure will be having good dreams tonight lol Facto 4 u : Im that tired i cant think of any lol
Hey TY, Wow so dam hot. It looks like someone needs an ass kicking for knocking on that door. LMAO. I like how you put your own things in the story. Take care and talk to you soon.
Hi Tylo, Sorry I’m coming to the game late so to speak – great story – can’t wait for your next chapter … sooner than later I hope!!! Thank you!!
damn, bet its Alice.got to love her or kill her. take your pick. That is pretty Hot. We have some baseball fans as writers.so you will be in good company. I’m a die hard Ranger fan.also Cubs and Mets. My Grand daughter had my Ranger quilt and Mets quilt out side on the ground last night with 3 other girls Looking at the stars. I knew where they were at. So did nt do much yelling. I received 2 Plaque Of Nolan Ryan 300career game. orig ticket and a 8×10 picture also one of his 7 no hitterwith his autograph ,card and orig ticket. See I have been a good girl(ha–ha) Bette is going to fall in love hard for Tina. as she will also. Candance is trouble I get my Phyical tomorrow morn if I pass, I”ll have the operation 25th of April. I’ll be home for Mother Day and Birthday. Sorry this is so long Will make them shorter. thanks for posting.
Jesus….Tylo you are a tease! How could you stop right there woman? I’m totally luvin this story and always look foreward to your posts. Your next needs to be VERY soon, cause that was not nice!
okay you little tease!there a few pages missing arent there.? youre getting the hang of this writing stuff and im proud of you,and youre starting to go with the flow like an old pro who been doing it for yrs,not just a few days or weeks.and you can really tell youre putting youre haert/soul into women.great job lady this sister is proud of you.p.p.s.
I say it again : you’re bad !!! LMAO, “there was a knock on the door”, pfff, do you really want to kill the readers? C’est pas juste…I’m glad to know that if I don’t remember what I had for dinner, I just have to ask you and I’ll get a quick and “multi-languaged” response lol.
Great chapter!The Indians? No, you mean the Yankees, right? The team with hitters but no pitchers…….. How did you end up UT and Indians? I’m from CT so that explains my UCONN and Yankees issues. LOVED Major League, though!
Oh Tylo…you tease! I can say it was worth the wait and the time spent askin’ ya about it! A knock at the door huh? Sucks for them and well….us as well!! Bring it on…have them ignore it…that’s it!! Ignore it ladies and keep going!! Great post T and we’ll chat soon. Oh, BTW, good soundtrack! You’ve got good taste!
Oh my Tylo you are bad,LOL!!! What a great chapter and I don’t like how Tina’s ex was back into the picture, dont sound too good. Once again loved it!!
I’m still trying to figure out why Bette was dancing with some hot-lookin’ chick. I guess I missed the bus on that one. Candace and Glenn need to go far, far away.
Wonderful and absolute hot chapter, but I don’t understand why some idiot had to interrupt their hot sex session! Please continue!
OMFG!!!tylo, What’s with the Big TEASE!!! I am so loving this. Do not get the door Bette. Thanks PPVS
Okay I haven’t read in a while and I opened the page and quickly read this chapter now I’m up late and am going to have to read the previous ones because this story is hot. Please finish the strip seen quick and post cause im ready to watch it unfold.
Wow woman you kept me up late. You and the Packer woman!!! LOL! All good. This is great Tam. I’m loving your pace, and I’m especially loving the sensual and steamy activities that have begun…ooOooo baby, bring it on…SULTRY SULTRY SULTRY.I won’t go into it all here, as we spoke tonight and you know how wonderful I think your story is. Your writing is truly progressing. My friend Sizz works for Curve Magazine as a writer. She has helped me with a few things myself. You live you learn. Love and Hugs babe. I’m off to bed now. Yes…the word that you know nothing about. I wouldn’t mind a bedtime story told to me again. **Mwahh hA HA HA HA.** Sweet Dreams….XoXo
what did u do?? U JUST STOP THERE!!! u just did what??? U JUST STOP THERE!!! now thats very very very MEAN.. u know that TYLO..no noodles.. am showin hands.. am showin hands!! hahah this is EXCELLENT..
Damn, tell the person to go away. Those two are steaming up the windows. Dang, my favorite baseball team already has a losing record and it is only the second week. Oh well, wait till next year. Carolyn Peck at one time was the Prudue coach when they won the National Championship. She then went on the coach in the WNBA in Orlando and then recently was at the University of Florida. She was replaced at the end of the season. She at one time had been an assistant coach under Pat Summit.
Damn B&T getting hot in here, and who the hell is at the door tell them to go away, cause B&T are busy!