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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 8
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“We will be there,” Tina said eagerly.
When she said that, Bette could tell she was smiling.
“Bye T”
Al and the girl she had been dancing with all night came back to the table. Bette was surprise to see that is was Tasha from UConn. Bette told them about meeting Spencer and going to Magic City later.
”Is that the strip club?” Tasha asked.
“Yes.” Bette confirmed.
They both were game about going. The girls continued to drink for a little bit, which resulted in them being a bit too drunk to drive to the strip club. They decided to take a cab.
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MAJIC CITY
When they got there, Bette asked the manager if they could have two private rooms. One for her and Tina, the other for Alasha. It cost $2,000, but it was the best money that Bette felt she would spend. She phoned Tina and told her she should come to the club now, then hung up before further conversation could take place.
When Tina arrived, Bette was waiting for her at the private room. She motioned for her to join her. Tina walked into the private room, and was taken in by how classy this was. She had heard of some strip clubs being less than tasteful, but from the time she walked into this joint, it had screamed first class….well, as first class as one could get for a strip club. As Tina looked at the leather couches, strategic lighting and mirrored walls, she saw Bette approach her from behind. The image in the mirror was completely sexy.
“No touching unless I give you permission” Bette said in a sultry voice. Her warm breaths teased the back of Tina’s neck. She turned Tina around, so that she was now facing her. She brought her lips close to Tina’s and then pulled them away as she slowly walked her backwards, until Tina’s back was against the door.
Tina felt Bette’s body move in closer and closer…pushing herself against her until there was no more room to step back. Bette’s body was now pressed firmly against Tina’s. Tina closed her eyes a moment as the power of Bette’s desires seemed to permeate the room.
“Jesus,” Tina muttered only moments before Bette pressed her lips firmly against Tina’s. Her tongue pushing against the blonde’s lips, demanding entry, which was easily granted. Both their tongues were volleying for position inside the other’s mouth as they slid from side to side and round and round. Tina couldn’t help but feel that this was the most sensuous kiss she had ever experienced with her yet. A kiss so full of emotion, so full of promise.
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Tylo…. That was Great. Very hot!!!!! I’m thinking the knock on the door is the chick that Bette danced with. I am not much of a baseball fan, a few years ago I liked the Braves because my brother made me watch all the games that he watched. Anyways, T the story was great but you left us hangin.
Looks lie you have kept everyone out of their beds lol im sitting with blury eyes cos im that tired but i think i forgot to comment on the last one, hmmm or did i ugggh cant remember so i had to make sure i defo commented this time well that was HOT i sure will be having good dreams tonight lol Facto 4 u : Im that tired i cant think of any lol
Hey TY, Wow so dam hot. It looks like someone needs an ass kicking for knocking on that door. LMAO. I like how you put your own things in the story. Take care and talk to you soon.
Hi Tylo, Sorry I’m coming to the game late so to speak – great story – can’t wait for your next chapter … sooner than later I hope!!! Thank you!!
damn, bet its Alice.got to love her or kill her. take your pick. That is pretty Hot. We have some baseball fans as writers.so you will be in good company. I’m a die hard Ranger fan.also Cubs and Mets. My Grand daughter had my Ranger quilt and Mets quilt out side on the ground last night with 3 other girls Looking at the stars. I knew where they were at. So did nt do much yelling. I received 2 Plaque Of Nolan Ryan 300career game. orig ticket and a 8×10 picture also one of his 7 no hitterwith his autograph ,card and orig ticket. See I have been a good girl(ha–ha) Bette is going to fall in love hard for Tina. as she will also. Candance is trouble I get my Phyical tomorrow morn if I pass, I”ll have the operation 25th of April. I’ll be home for Mother Day and Birthday. Sorry this is so long Will make them shorter. thanks for posting.
Jesus….Tylo you are a tease! How could you stop right there woman? I’m totally luvin this story and always look foreward to your posts. Your next needs to be VERY soon, cause that was not nice!
okay you little tease!there a few pages missing arent there.? youre getting the hang of this writing stuff and im proud of you,and youre starting to go with the flow like an old pro who been doing it for yrs,not just a few days or weeks.and you can really tell youre putting youre haert/soul into women.great job lady this sister is proud of you.p.p.s.
I say it again : you’re bad !!! LMAO, “there was a knock on the door”, pfff, do you really want to kill the readers? C’est pas juste…I’m glad to know that if I don’t remember what I had for dinner, I just have to ask you and I’ll get a quick and “multi-languaged” response lol.
Great chapter!The Indians? No, you mean the Yankees, right? The team with hitters but no pitchers…….. How did you end up UT and Indians? I’m from CT so that explains my UCONN and Yankees issues. LOVED Major League, though!
Oh Tylo…you tease! I can say it was worth the wait and the time spent askin’ ya about it! A knock at the door huh? Sucks for them and well….us as well!! Bring it on…have them ignore it…that’s it!! Ignore it ladies and keep going!! Great post T and we’ll chat soon. Oh, BTW, good soundtrack! You’ve got good taste!
Oh my Tylo you are bad,LOL!!! What a great chapter and I don’t like how Tina’s ex was back into the picture, dont sound too good. Once again loved it!!
I’m still trying to figure out why Bette was dancing with some hot-lookin’ chick. I guess I missed the bus on that one. Candace and Glenn need to go far, far away.
Wonderful and absolute hot chapter, but I don’t understand why some idiot had to interrupt their hot sex session! Please continue!
OMFG!!!tylo, What’s with the Big TEASE!!! I am so loving this. Do not get the door Bette. Thanks PPVS
Okay I haven’t read in a while and I opened the page and quickly read this chapter now I’m up late and am going to have to read the previous ones because this story is hot. Please finish the strip seen quick and post cause im ready to watch it unfold.
Wow woman you kept me up late. You and the Packer woman!!! LOL! All good. This is great Tam. I’m loving your pace, and I’m especially loving the sensual and steamy activities that have begun…ooOooo baby, bring it on…SULTRY SULTRY SULTRY.I won’t go into it all here, as we spoke tonight and you know how wonderful I think your story is. Your writing is truly progressing. My friend Sizz works for Curve Magazine as a writer. She has helped me with a few things myself. You live you learn. Love and Hugs babe. I’m off to bed now. Yes…the word that you know nothing about. I wouldn’t mind a bedtime story told to me again. **Mwahh hA HA HA HA.** Sweet Dreams….XoXo
what did u do?? U JUST STOP THERE!!! u just did what??? U JUST STOP THERE!!! now thats very very very MEAN.. u know that TYLO..no noodles.. am showin hands.. am showin hands!! hahah this is EXCELLENT..
Damn, tell the person to go away. Those two are steaming up the windows. Dang, my favorite baseball team already has a losing record and it is only the second week. Oh well, wait till next year. Carolyn Peck at one time was the Prudue coach when they won the National Championship. She then went on the coach in the WNBA in Orlando and then recently was at the University of Florida. She was replaced at the end of the season. She at one time had been an assistant coach under Pat Summit.
Damn B&T getting hot in here, and who the hell is at the door tell them to go away, cause B&T are busy!