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“Hoops & Layups” – Chapter 8
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Bette had regretfully broken the kiss because her lungs were on fire. She pushed Tina down into the chair, flashed her Porter smile and straddled the chair as she hooked her thumbs under Tina’s shirt, unhooking her bra, but allowing Tina’s t-shirt to remain on.
Tina could feel her nipples harden, so much so that they ached at the moment her bra released them.
‘Damn…..she has magical hands’ Tina thought to herself as Bette reached for the bottom of Tina’s shirt, lifting it slowly up her body, exposing a small patch of skin along the way.
In as much as Bette was in control of removing Tina’s top, she wanted nothing more but to just rip it off. However, watching the blonde’s eyes fill with desire and need just fueled Bette more and more to continue this “slow” journey instead of rushing it.
Tina could feel the ache rush from her nipples to her center as Bette stood back up. She reached for Bette, who reminded her of the rules.
“No touching….remember?” Bette asked as she took the pin out of her hair, allowing her long brown hair to drop down and flow against her shoulders.
Bette pulled the rest of Tina’s shirt up, and over her head, revealing a set of beautiful breasts, whose nipples were completely erect. Bette’s eyes almost fell out of her head. Her mouth went dry like the Mojave dessert.
The desire and lust that built in Bette’s eyes caused Tina to join her in a bit of irregular breathing that only got heavier. There were no tan lines on that skin that seemed to have a hint of a tan hue to it. Her breasts were perfect, and Bette ached to touch them.
The sound system was intense, and only added to the steaminess in the room. The song changed to some techno beat as Bette straddled Tina once again. This time, her body needed to be close to Tina, so she had begun grinding into Tina’s hips. Tina didn’t hesitate to raise her hips up and grind them against Bette.
Bette brought her face close to Tina’s, as if to kiss her and then quickly moved her face to the side, instead bringing her wet tongue to Tina’s neck, just below her ear.
“Oh god……that….feels…….Mmmm” Tina expressed moans as her center tightened more, the grinding forcing her center to rub against her thong. She could feel how wet she was for Bette.
"Can you handle more?" Bette asked as she nipped Tina’s ear.
Before Tina could answer, Bette stood up from the chair and did a backward handstand on one hand, while unbuttoning her pants. Tina was shocked at not only her flexibility, but just the position itself. She was on fire just watching Bette.
"Stand up Tina" Bette said in a commanding but hoarse tone.
As Tina rose from the chair, Bette said down. “Now….you take my pants off” she said in a demanding and overly confident voice.
“I can touch you?” Tina asked.
“Yes….you can touch me” Bette confirmed.
Tina wasted no time, having taken them off in only two seconds. For a few minutes, both women stared at the other, aching to touch one another. Bette was the first to move. She grabbed Tina’s wrist, and when she did, it was like touching a live wire.
"You’re going to lose your voice before we leave here tonight" Bette said as she unsnapped my jeans.
As soon as she did this…….there was a knock on the door.
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Tylo…. That was Great. Very hot!!!!! I’m thinking the knock on the door is the chick that Bette danced with. I am not much of a baseball fan, a few years ago I liked the Braves because my brother made me watch all the games that he watched. Anyways, T the story was great but you left us hangin.
Looks lie you have kept everyone out of their beds lol im sitting with blury eyes cos im that tired but i think i forgot to comment on the last one, hmmm or did i ugggh cant remember so i had to make sure i defo commented this time well that was HOT i sure will be having good dreams tonight lol Facto 4 u : Im that tired i cant think of any lol
Hey TY, Wow so dam hot. It looks like someone needs an ass kicking for knocking on that door. LMAO. I like how you put your own things in the story. Take care and talk to you soon.
Hi Tylo, Sorry I’m coming to the game late so to speak – great story – can’t wait for your next chapter … sooner than later I hope!!! Thank you!!
damn, bet its Alice.got to love her or kill her. take your pick. That is pretty Hot. We have some baseball fans as writers.so you will be in good company. I’m a die hard Ranger fan.also Cubs and Mets. My Grand daughter had my Ranger quilt and Mets quilt out side on the ground last night with 3 other girls Looking at the stars. I knew where they were at. So did nt do much yelling. I received 2 Plaque Of Nolan Ryan 300career game. orig ticket and a 8×10 picture also one of his 7 no hitterwith his autograph ,card and orig ticket. See I have been a good girl(ha–ha) Bette is going to fall in love hard for Tina. as she will also. Candance is trouble I get my Phyical tomorrow morn if I pass, I”ll have the operation 25th of April. I’ll be home for Mother Day and Birthday. Sorry this is so long Will make them shorter. thanks for posting.
Jesus….Tylo you are a tease! How could you stop right there woman? I’m totally luvin this story and always look foreward to your posts. Your next needs to be VERY soon, cause that was not nice!
okay you little tease!there a few pages missing arent there.? youre getting the hang of this writing stuff and im proud of you,and youre starting to go with the flow like an old pro who been doing it for yrs,not just a few days or weeks.and you can really tell youre putting youre haert/soul into women.great job lady this sister is proud of you.p.p.s.
I say it again : you’re bad !!! LMAO, “there was a knock on the door”, pfff, do you really want to kill the readers? C’est pas juste…I’m glad to know that if I don’t remember what I had for dinner, I just have to ask you and I’ll get a quick and “multi-languaged” response lol.
Great chapter!The Indians? No, you mean the Yankees, right? The team with hitters but no pitchers…….. How did you end up UT and Indians? I’m from CT so that explains my UCONN and Yankees issues. LOVED Major League, though!
Oh Tylo…you tease! I can say it was worth the wait and the time spent askin’ ya about it! A knock at the door huh? Sucks for them and well….us as well!! Bring it on…have them ignore it…that’s it!! Ignore it ladies and keep going!! Great post T and we’ll chat soon. Oh, BTW, good soundtrack! You’ve got good taste!
Oh my Tylo you are bad,LOL!!! What a great chapter and I don’t like how Tina’s ex was back into the picture, dont sound too good. Once again loved it!!
I’m still trying to figure out why Bette was dancing with some hot-lookin’ chick. I guess I missed the bus on that one. Candace and Glenn need to go far, far away.
Wonderful and absolute hot chapter, but I don’t understand why some idiot had to interrupt their hot sex session! Please continue!
OMFG!!!tylo, What’s with the Big TEASE!!! I am so loving this. Do not get the door Bette. Thanks PPVS
Okay I haven’t read in a while and I opened the page and quickly read this chapter now I’m up late and am going to have to read the previous ones because this story is hot. Please finish the strip seen quick and post cause im ready to watch it unfold.
Wow woman you kept me up late. You and the Packer woman!!! LOL! All good. This is great Tam. I’m loving your pace, and I’m especially loving the sensual and steamy activities that have begun…ooOooo baby, bring it on…SULTRY SULTRY SULTRY.I won’t go into it all here, as we spoke tonight and you know how wonderful I think your story is. Your writing is truly progressing. My friend Sizz works for Curve Magazine as a writer. She has helped me with a few things myself. You live you learn. Love and Hugs babe. I’m off to bed now. Yes…the word that you know nothing about. I wouldn’t mind a bedtime story told to me again. **Mwahh hA HA HA HA.** Sweet Dreams….XoXo
what did u do?? U JUST STOP THERE!!! u just did what??? U JUST STOP THERE!!! now thats very very very MEAN.. u know that TYLO..no noodles.. am showin hands.. am showin hands!! hahah this is EXCELLENT..
Damn, tell the person to go away. Those two are steaming up the windows. Dang, my favorite baseball team already has a losing record and it is only the second week. Oh well, wait till next year. Carolyn Peck at one time was the Prudue coach when they won the National Championship. She then went on the coach in the WNBA in Orlando and then recently was at the University of Florida. She was replaced at the end of the season. She at one time had been an assistant coach under Pat Summit.
Damn B&T getting hot in here, and who the hell is at the door tell them to go away, cause B&T are busy!