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How hard Can it Be – Part 2
You think I should tell her that we should spend some time apart so that she can figure out that she loves me? Bette nodded and Alice closed her eyes before she spoke again. Well thats gonna be really hard, considering that Ive never been so scared to lose someone in my entire life. She said gravely when she opened her eyes again..
So, hows Jenny doing? Carmen asked around a mouth full of food.
Shes doing better. Not great, but better. Marks home right now. Shane noticed that Carmens eyes had darkened.
What? She asked as her fork slowly dropped from her mouth without depositing any food.
Nothing. I just cant figure out what you see in him. Especially after the cameras and everything. Carmen shrugged and continued. I just, I dont know if I would have forgiven him so easily thats all. I really dont know if I have.
Shane stared at Carmen for a long few seconds before answering. Well, you should. She said before she turned back toward her food and took the bite that had been left on her fork. You know this is really good. Shane said changing the subject.
Carmen decided to let it go for the moment, but reminded herself to ask again later. My mom taught me how to make it. You like it huh?
Yeah you should cook for me more often. Shane smiled at Carmen and studied the woman sitting across form her. You know you look beautiful tonight. Shane said, the food suddenly forgotten as Carmen looked up and Shane caught her eyes.
Carmen couldnt help the happy smile that spread across her face at Shanes compliment. Is this that thing where you treat me like a girl? She teased.
Maybe. Shane said, her eyes not letting go of the beautiful brown ones that were staring intently back at her. Shane had to fight back the urge to repeat the confession of love that she had dropped on Carmen the other night, but Carmen could see it in her eyes. The way that Shanes eyes were holding her own made it impossible or her to look away. Carmen lost her breath for a second at the intensity that was staring at her. Feeling girly? Shane asked as she smirked and finally dropped her gaze.
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(41 votes, average: 3.51 out of 5)
Thanks for letting me read your fic. I think that you know exactly each characters, specially Shane and Carmen..Please keep going…
I love this but I do hope that dana picks alice as they are so good together please post soon can’t wait to see what happens next
Just please keep going , you know how to write Shand and Carmen I like it very much . 5 STARS!!!
‘I’ got butterflies when i read that! beautifully written, x
The ending was soo cute,please post more soon.
I really like your fic. Please continue.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
“Lara is the fun one” this made me laugh quiet a bit. I wish the writers thought more like you–there can be danish drama without all the weird character assination. Keep up the good work.
That was great! Shane and Carmen are so cute. i hope Shane tells Carmen more about her past.
Really good job, go on!!!
Awsome….sad there wasnt more of it..what happens? does shane wake up?
I love reading your story. Shane and Carmen are so cute together. I can’t wait for the next update and thank you for writing.
how about ‘how hard could this be?’ like Alice said, since its wat she and im assuming shane and carmen too
for the title i mean lol