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I Fall Behind pt.8
Previously:
Alice ended the call and ran to the bathroom. She knocked on the door
rapidly until a dripping Dana opened it. “Baby? What is it? Is it…
mmph!” The rest of Dana’s words were swallowed by Alice’s hungry kiss.
In a flash, Alice was naked and pushing Dana back under the shower. The
last thing Dana heard before she was drowned in the rush of her
pleasure was, “Hurry up baby, we have an hour til we have to meet Tina
Kennard at the Planet. She wants to ask us about Bette. Raise your leg
babe…”
Tina stood outside Bette’s apartment door exactly at
quarter to 8 o’ clock. Alice had said that Bette hated tardiness with a
vengeance, dating back to the time Melvin was two hours late picking
her up at the airport during one spring break weakend. Tina had a whole
arsenal of information pertaining to Bette, courtesy of Alice and Dana,
and was not afraid to use it.
A glance at her watch told her she had a few more
minutes to go before her she could knock. Dana had said that Bette
didn’t like people to be too early at her door with her breakfast. Tina
wasn’t breakfast, but she liked to think she was something Bette would
be eager to partake of.
Tina gave her skintight leather mini skirt a tug and
glanced at her *****. Perfect and maximum enhancement, she gleefully
thought. Alice had said that Bette liked *****, but Tina wasn’t
taking any chances. She shifted her twins more snugly in their push-up
confinement and glanced down. Just enough cleavage to still pass as
decent, but shading dangerously close to slutdom. She was satisfied at
how the white silk V-neck blouse draped casually but strikingly over
her shapely body. When she described the outfit over lunch, Dana had
dropped her fork and Alice had to pick it up.
*****
“Youch! Alice, you stabbed me!” Dana had glared at her girlfriend, rubbing at her thigh.
“I did not! Anyway, so Tina, after you totally knock
Bette’s socks into the next millenium, what are you guys doing next?”
“Well,” Tina smiled but Alice and Dana imagined her
rubbing her hands together and laughing evilly, “I plan on knocking
more than Bette’s socks into the next millenum. Will you guys be going
to Milk, too?”
“Yeah but 8′s too early. Usually only the dorky
lezzies come that early… wait, yeah. Bette might be more comfortable
with that crowd.” Alice nodded in approval.
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(92 votes, average: 3.29 out of 5)
i’m glad tina did her research, it turned out better that way…i hope she will be able to tame bette and to open her up…love this, love your writing style and you get award for humor
just wanted to say I’m enjoying your story have a lot of it still to catch up on. And mad props for taking in the cat and getting it treated.
hi CROO – long time no hear.fergz – we have got to stop meeting like this and do it in the flesh so to speak. loved this chappy. tina is soo gonna show bette endless love. giving the money back. good show. thanks.
This story reminds me of a combination of two of my favorite authors Does anyone remember Marg? She of the witty repartee, Bette and Tina carrying on like Tracy and Hepburn? Screwball comedy at its best! And Greentea, the writer of an intriguing Tina, strong yet complex with a compassionate heart. You’re in good company. This is a very fresh story. Bette reminds me of a Cary Grant character – impossibly good-looking and totally oblivious to the fact. I can almost see her, bespectacled and bewildered. Tina removes her glasses and shows her a new world. Great!
Love your Tina she is so sweet and gentle and so in love with Bette and has been for four yrs. Jeeze. why did she just try to meet her.
Loved your story from the start. Funny and sweet. — But I am touched too by the kindness and generosity of your heart, giving love and care to a crippled cat. — I think I’m going to go spend some quality time with my own cat now. I had been working a lot lately and haven’t played with him. Thanks.
I like a the vunerable side of Bette but I hope that withe the help of Tina she will becoming stronger and more confident with her self. Post soon and great story.
Wait. Tina is a hooker, right? Or did I skim an important chapter?
Good chapter and let see what’s next, thanks!
I have enjoyed your story, to see how vunerable Bette is, and how strong Tina is. Please post a new chapter soon. Hope your cat is alright.
I am so in love with your Tina and Bette…thank you and please post soon
beautiful…. i love your tina… and i know she will succeed… great story…please continue
really great story…love this twist!!!! post soon, I like seeing them both squirm
I stabbed the cat with a fork after it bit me. Haha! Nah, I’m kidding. The cat needed major surgery to drain an abcess and to clean up and stitch it up. It was a stray I picked up. Someone had amputated its leg then it either ran away or was set free. The stump was infected when I found him. The poor thing’s sleeping now. He’s gonna be okay :)
great update post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! I’m just catch up to read all of your chapter Wonderful Story Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Awwww, Tinas is so sweet! I am so glad that she gave back the money. I would hate for her to continue pursuing Bette simply because she was paid to do so. Great chapter! I love the sensitive, tender, relaxed side of both ladies. Please post soon. I want to know what happens next. I’m a tad bit anxious. =)
Tina is great with Bette. I can’t wait for more. Ok, I can but i would prefer not to
THAT WAS GREAT..THANKS
So tasty, Tina is a lovely tease, gets my panties in a bunch way over here…I know Bette will be the best nut she’s ever cracked…Fab 7pm, please post real soon
7 im so addicted i want urs posts to b like 10 pages!! haha neways continue soon thanks
ok i’m totally envious of techgirl’s comment cuz it’s right on. incredibly good this story.