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I Fall Behind pt.8
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“Silly. Bette and I aren’t going directly to Milk. We’re going someplace else first.”
“Where?”
“Someplace she has no chance of being comfortable
in,” Tina suddenly pulled something from her purse. “Here, Alice, I
don’t think I should be keeping this.”
“It’s my money! I mean, it’s yours now. I paid you and you delivered. So… keep it!”
“Nah. I don’t feel right keeping it. After all, I
should be paying YOU.” Tina smiled so dazzlingly that both Alice and
Dana were transfixed, allowing Tina to slip the white envelope into
Alice’s bag. “Anyway, I got to go. Bye, guys! I’ll see you later!”
“Bye…” Alice murmured, still enthralled until she
felt something sharp poke at her forearm. “What? Ow! Babe, you stabbed
me with a fork!”
“Just doing the world a favor. Come on, let’s go
home. I’ve been practicing my routine and I think this time, I’ll be
able to unzip my jeans WHILE unsnapping my bra.”
“Oh Goody! And I now have money to stuff into your panties too! Life is good!”
*****
Back to the present, at Bette’s door, Tina finally
allowed herself to knock. A second later, the door swung open.
Tina smiled widely, surprised that Bette was
actually wearing something that didn’t have a stiff collar and that her
skirt didn’t match her top. “You’re beautiful.” Tina allowed a tiny
amount of teasing into her voice.
“Oh in this old thing?” Bette laughed softly and
smoothed the soft fabric of her blouse over her flat stomach. “Do you
want to come in for a minute? I’ll just get my purse”
Tina wondered if she’d fallen into a rabbit hole.
Here was Bette but she was not-Bette at the same time. Bette looked
soft and relaxed. She wasn’t trying to educate Tina, or talk her ear
off. Hmm… Could this be the gentle pliable Bette that Alice had
talked about? But she said Bette only became this way when she was…
Tina froze by the door… drunk.
Bette emerged from the bedroom trailing a black bag
from limp fingers. Tina looked at her closely and noticed the
overly-careful steps, the heavy eyelids, and the bright sheen of sweat
over Bette’s forehead. She shook her head. No way, this just won’t do.
“I changed my mind. Why don’t we just stay in? I saw
on TV Guide that there’s something on French Rennaissance artists on
Discovery tonight.” Tina took Bette’s hand and tucked it into the crook
of her arm. She gave it a pat and led Bette to the couch.
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i’m glad tina did her research, it turned out better that way…i hope she will be able to tame bette and to open her up…love this, love your writing style and you get award for humor
just wanted to say I’m enjoying your story have a lot of it still to catch up on. And mad props for taking in the cat and getting it treated.
hi CROO – long time no hear.fergz – we have got to stop meeting like this and do it in the flesh so to speak. loved this chappy. tina is soo gonna show bette endless love. giving the money back. good show. thanks.
This story reminds me of a combination of two of my favorite authors Does anyone remember Marg? She of the witty repartee, Bette and Tina carrying on like Tracy and Hepburn? Screwball comedy at its best! And Greentea, the writer of an intriguing Tina, strong yet complex with a compassionate heart. You’re in good company. This is a very fresh story. Bette reminds me of a Cary Grant character – impossibly good-looking and totally oblivious to the fact. I can almost see her, bespectacled and bewildered. Tina removes her glasses and shows her a new world. Great!
Love your Tina she is so sweet and gentle and so in love with Bette and has been for four yrs. Jeeze. why did she just try to meet her.
Loved your story from the start. Funny and sweet. — But I am touched too by the kindness and generosity of your heart, giving love and care to a crippled cat. — I think I’m going to go spend some quality time with my own cat now. I had been working a lot lately and haven’t played with him. Thanks.
I like a the vunerable side of Bette but I hope that withe the help of Tina she will becoming stronger and more confident with her self. Post soon and great story.
Wait. Tina is a hooker, right? Or did I skim an important chapter?
Good chapter and let see what’s next, thanks!
I have enjoyed your story, to see how vunerable Bette is, and how strong Tina is. Please post a new chapter soon. Hope your cat is alright.
I am so in love with your Tina and Bette…thank you and please post soon
beautiful…. i love your tina… and i know she will succeed… great story…please continue
really great story…love this twist!!!! post soon, I like seeing them both squirm
I stabbed the cat with a fork after it bit me. Haha! Nah, I’m kidding. The cat needed major surgery to drain an abcess and to clean up and stitch it up. It was a stray I picked up. Someone had amputated its leg then it either ran away or was set free. The stump was infected when I found him. The poor thing’s sleeping now. He’s gonna be okay :)
great update post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! I’m just catch up to read all of your chapter Wonderful Story Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Awwww, Tinas is so sweet! I am so glad that she gave back the money. I would hate for her to continue pursuing Bette simply because she was paid to do so. Great chapter! I love the sensitive, tender, relaxed side of both ladies. Please post soon. I want to know what happens next. I’m a tad bit anxious. =)
Tina is great with Bette. I can’t wait for more. Ok, I can but i would prefer not to
THAT WAS GREAT..THANKS
So tasty, Tina is a lovely tease, gets my panties in a bunch way over here…I know Bette will be the best nut she’s ever cracked…Fab 7pm, please post real soon
7 im so addicted i want urs posts to b like 10 pages!! haha neways continue soon thanks
ok i’m totally envious of techgirl’s comment cuz it’s right on. incredibly good this story.