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I Fall Behind pt.8
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“Hey, no wait. I… I dressed to go out. We have to
go out.” Bette’s voice was measured, too measured. Standing so close,
Tina faintly smelled alcohol on Bette’s breath.
“Then go and change into something more comfortable. Go on, I’ll wait right here.”
“Okay.” Bette walked sedately into her bedroom and
started to pull off her top. Tina quickly sat on the couch, and turned
the TV on with the remote. Her brain was telling her to keep her cool
and that making love to a drunk Bette didn’t count. Her body, on the
other hand, was jumping up and down and screaming in jubilation.
Tina sighed. Her brain was right. Taking advantage
of Bette in this situation wasn’t something Tina Kennard had to resort
to. She was going to have Bette willing, eager, and so so wet in bed
and she didn’t need alcohol to help her. A decisive nod punctuated her
decision.
Bette came out of the bedroom in pajamas. Tina
blinked twice to make sure she didn’t mistake what the beautiful
brunette was wearing. Flannel pajamas? Flannel? Not you too, Bette!
Tina took a minute to reconfigure her mental image of Bette Porter.
Pictures of Bette in various outfits flitted in and out of her mind,
interspersed with quite a number of pictures of Bette butt naked, until
she came upon one of Bette in lingerie. She quickly erased that and
clothed Bette in flannel.
“Come here.” Tina motioned in a friendly manner to
the space beside her on the couch. Bette complied without a word. Alice
was right, Tina thought, a drunk Bette is an obedient Bette. At least
when she’s not too drunk. Too-drunk Bette is an I-swear-off-*****-forever
Bette. Tina was quick to count her blessings.
They watched TV for a couple of minutes. Actually,
Tina forced her head to be immobile facing the TV while Bette watched
her chest.
“Tina,” Bette’s somber voice interrupted the British narrator.
“Yeah Bette?”
“You have the most beautiful ***** I have ever seen.”
Tina’s breath caught, but before she could respond, Bette had scrambled back to the other end of the couch.
“I mean, purely from the standpoint of an epicure,
you understand. I see ***** everyday! Several times a day. From
pictures. Uh, of paintings. I’m head curator at the CAC. I see pictures
of paintings of naked women everyday!” Bette’s tongue fairly tripped
over itself and her slurring was pronounced. Tina could have laughed if
she wasn’t so frustrated.
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i’m glad tina did her research, it turned out better that way…i hope she will be able to tame bette and to open her up…love this, love your writing style and you get award for humor
just wanted to say I’m enjoying your story have a lot of it still to catch up on. And mad props for taking in the cat and getting it treated.
hi CROO – long time no hear.fergz – we have got to stop meeting like this and do it in the flesh so to speak. loved this chappy. tina is soo gonna show bette endless love. giving the money back. good show. thanks.
This story reminds me of a combination of two of my favorite authors Does anyone remember Marg? She of the witty repartee, Bette and Tina carrying on like Tracy and Hepburn? Screwball comedy at its best! And Greentea, the writer of an intriguing Tina, strong yet complex with a compassionate heart. You’re in good company. This is a very fresh story. Bette reminds me of a Cary Grant character – impossibly good-looking and totally oblivious to the fact. I can almost see her, bespectacled and bewildered. Tina removes her glasses and shows her a new world. Great!
Love your Tina she is so sweet and gentle and so in love with Bette and has been for four yrs. Jeeze. why did she just try to meet her.
Loved your story from the start. Funny and sweet. — But I am touched too by the kindness and generosity of your heart, giving love and care to a crippled cat. — I think I’m going to go spend some quality time with my own cat now. I had been working a lot lately and haven’t played with him. Thanks.
I like a the vunerable side of Bette but I hope that withe the help of Tina she will becoming stronger and more confident with her self. Post soon and great story.
Wait. Tina is a hooker, right? Or did I skim an important chapter?
Good chapter and let see what’s next, thanks!
I have enjoyed your story, to see how vunerable Bette is, and how strong Tina is. Please post a new chapter soon. Hope your cat is alright.
I am so in love with your Tina and Bette…thank you and please post soon
beautiful…. i love your tina… and i know she will succeed… great story…please continue
really great story…love this twist!!!! post soon, I like seeing them both squirm
I stabbed the cat with a fork after it bit me. Haha! Nah, I’m kidding. The cat needed major surgery to drain an abcess and to clean up and stitch it up. It was a stray I picked up. Someone had amputated its leg then it either ran away or was set free. The stump was infected when I found him. The poor thing’s sleeping now. He’s gonna be okay :)
great update post now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whoa! I’m just catch up to read all of your chapter Wonderful Story Please continue post soon Thanks!!!
Awwww, Tinas is so sweet! I am so glad that she gave back the money. I would hate for her to continue pursuing Bette simply because she was paid to do so. Great chapter! I love the sensitive, tender, relaxed side of both ladies. Please post soon. I want to know what happens next. I’m a tad bit anxious. =)
Tina is great with Bette. I can’t wait for more. Ok, I can but i would prefer not to
THAT WAS GREAT..THANKS
So tasty, Tina is a lovely tease, gets my panties in a bunch way over here…I know Bette will be the best nut she’s ever cracked…Fab 7pm, please post real soon
7 im so addicted i want urs posts to b like 10 pages!! haha neways continue soon thanks
ok i’m totally envious of techgirl’s comment cuz it’s right on. incredibly good this story.