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I Will Not Let You Fall
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The brunette inched back and looked at Tina. She could note Tina’s flushed skin and uneven breathing. Her words had provided the needed effect and Bette was feeling triumphal, but was not about to demonstrate it yet.
Bette smiled innocently at her clearly flustered girlfriend. Feigning nonchalance, she leaned in and pecked on Tina’s nose gently. ”Drive safely, alright baby?”
Coming out of daze, Tina nodded before timorously making her way out of the kitchen and finally out of the apartment. Now standing outside the front door, Tina released the breath she had been holding. Bette’s erotic voice that was echoing in her head threatened to torture her throughout the rest of the day, the blonde was sure. But what aroused her the most was that she knew Bette was undoubtedly capable of fulfilling the naughty promise she had given a few minutes ago.
She could sense how her plans considering having a break from sex collapsed miserably.
”Damn it, Bette,” Tina smiled to herself, shaking her head.
***
Shortly after Tina’s leaving Bette was crossing the threshold of her condo as well. As she was locking the door, she could hear the opening doors of the elevator and what she supposed was the rustling of paper. In a second Mrs. Caroll appeared around the corner, panting as she held grocery bags and seeming to limp just a little.
Bette leapt to help the elderly woman. Without saying a word she took the bags out of her arms and followed the breathless neighbor toward her apartment. Once inside, Bette aimed for the kitchen purposefully to put the bags on the table. She then strode to the living room where she saw Mrs. Caroll reclining in the armchair, wincing in pain.
Bette was seething mad. ”What is wrong with you?! Don’t you have my phone number?! Would it have killed you to call and ask for help? Huh? What are you trying to pose as? A fucking twenty year old?!”
The woman fixed her with a glare if a bit weakly. ”Language, Bette.”
”My language is very damn much appropriate right now! I’m mad as hell at you!” Bette was on the verge of yelling. ”We’ve talked a hundred of times about you carrying heavy weight or going food-shopping alone and still you would do it! You have a fucking arthritis, this is not a joke, goddammit!”
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Hey Valerie, welcome back!
I am very happy for the very long update, but i can’t read it now. I’m going for a vacation in a few hours.
I hope to read it in a few days.
But again, i am very excited to see a update!
Still not able to read )-: wifi connection is really bad, sometimes i am able to read short chapters. Or to leave a comment.
But the weather is fantastic!
Hi Valerie
We have missed you. This chapter is so beautiful, thanks for give them time for love, not only sex, which, but the way, was so, so hot; but especially love, and we see it very clearly at the end of the chapter; I haven’t notice any boring part in this post, on the contrary, because we are worry for the sake of Bette and terrified for her criminal deeds, we need to know, how is she doing, now that she is ‘boss’, perhaps she has more possibilities to negotiate her and her friends’ redemption. I’m sorry for Shane and Carmen; Bette could see herself in that mirror; I like that Helena is back (hope is not snitching on them) because after all, they are friends, I think Tina’s influence on Bette is good for the recovery of Bette as a human being.
I don’t understand how and why, but for some reason this chapter has given me optimisms of a clean and happy future life for Bette and Tina, a faith for redemption (I hope I’m not delirious). I appreciate a lot the long chapter, but please update more frequently, this story is too good, I enjoyed reading it; thanks and please post soon.
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So happy to see a new chapter, this one was hot ! So bonus for me :) Love this story so much , a different take on them and I’m enjoying the ride. Please post soon and as always thanks for sharing.
Yes, back at home and finally able to catch up! And wow, you didn’t disappointed me.
I agree complety with proteonomics comment. I have faith for their future.
I still hope and wish that Bette is a undercover agent and isn’t the “bad” woman in your story.
I love the love and hotness between B&T.
Thank you so much for continuing with this incredible story!
Very hot indeed…love Tina trusting and giving all control over to Bette…so glad they are happy but not sure how Bette will get herself out of the messy life she’s in. Helena’s back for a reason…thank you..
I loved this chapter.
I still have my heart in my hand because Bette is now a boss, and that makes her even more involved in crime and also become a target for her enemies. Bette has to get out of this life as quickly as possible before it’s too late.
It was simply sensational the bette and tina love scene, pure provocation.
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