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I Will Not Let You Fall

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Shane’s Jeep drove up to Bette at the curb and the brunette got into the front passenger seat before the car set forward again. The brunette acknowledged Shane with a glance, then turned to look at her sister, who was sitting in the backseat with her arms folded across her chest. The woman appeared angry, upset and confused.
”Thank you for doing this,” Bette said gently.
”What is this? I don’t even know what I’m doing,” Kit replied in exasperation. ”Tell me now.”
Bette contemplated for a moment. ”Have you collected your belongings? Didn’t forget all the essentials?”
Kit made a face. ”Yes, Bette. I’ve done everything you asked me to do. Now tell me what the hell am I doing? What the hell are YOU doing? Where am I going? What’s going on, Bette?!”
Bette turned away from her anxious sister to look into the windshield. ”You’re leaving the country, Kit.”
”Excuse me?!”
As Bette looked through the documents that Shane had handed her, she tried to provide proper explanation that her sister deserved. ”Listen to me, Kit. You need to leave US, because staying here is becoming dangerous. Marcus’s wife and son are also going with you.”
”Wha–”
Bette turned to give Kit a file. ”Here’s your new ID, driver’s license, some other necessary papers, and your plane ticket. Take a read right now and try to remember everything. These documents are your new life, Kit.”
Utterly dumbfounded, Kit stared at Bette with her mouth open. She then lowered her gaze slowly to the file. There on the fake ID she could see her picture, but the name under it was KATHERINE POTTINGER, the same name that appeared on her ticket. Also, the ticketed destination was indicated as AUCKLAND.
Kit’s head shot up. ”New Zealand?!”
Bette nodded. ”I bought a beach house in the suburbs of Auckland a few months ago. You will live there. You’ll like the house. When you land, my person will meet you, transport you and show you around. You can trust that person with everything. Whenever you will need help or any kind of assistance, turn to that person. The thing is that once you’re there, you won’t be able to contact me, in any form. As soon as your plane takes off, I’m discarding my current SIM card and getting myself a new one, so you wouldn’t know my number. It’s for safety, don’t ask. Give me your phone, Kit,” the brunette demanded, holding out her hand expectantly. Kit pulled her phone out of her pocket fussily and put it into Bette’s hand. ”You will be given a new phone with a new SIM card when you arrive,” the brunette clarified.
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Hi Valerie:
This is sad as you said, but it’s also a great story, Marcus has been murdered and his killers are dead, apparently, it was Arnodelo who planned his death and he may go after Bette and Shane.
What bothers me is that one of the killers said (before dying) that they had the protection of the cops, which for me it could mean that Arnodelo wants to show that Bette alone with her gang is the criminal head behind the drug trafficking, because, in that way, he will have a break from the police persecution, while Bette and the gang are murdered making appeared as it was a fight among gangsters.
Now, honestly, I think we have reached the point in which Bette and Shane have to make a decision, and I trust you, Valerie, that you will lead us, sooner or later, in this wonderful, and amazing rollercoaster-story to a happy end.
Thank you so much for this excellent and heartbreaking story, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
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I loveeeeee this dark story. Please update this soon.
Hey Valerie,
I am excited for the update, but i will read it in a few days. I need some happy and sweet and not sad and dark.
I truly enjoy your story and will follow it to the hopefully happy end.
Hey Valerie, i just read the chapter and boy you were right about warning us it was a sad one.
Especially the end where Tina took Bette in her arms and she finally broke down.
I still trust and hope that you stick to the title and that you will not let us and Bette fall.
It will be interesting to read how you are going to let Bette leave this mess and hopefully start a new life with Tina (and Shane) in Auckland. But that is my wish, maybe you have another end for this incredible story.
Thank you so much for for this incredible story!
I read the post 5 days ago and I’ve been contemplating about it since then. I definitely simpathize this Bette Porter, but I can’t decide for myself wether this is becouse it is still our Bette even if in a different incarnation, or because the circumstances of her life are so that we can’t help feeling pity for this woman. So what do you think, would we still like the main character if it were not Bette Porter ?