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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on September 23, 2018 by Valerie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=95164
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    Bette almost felt ashamed for acting so cold in front of Tina, the woman her heart belonged to, the woman who was so obviously unhappy in her life. Bette knew. Bette felt it. Getting up, the brunette took a breath and approached the door. She unlocked it and pushed it open. It was light and

    Bette almost felt ashamed for acting so cold in front of Tina, the woman her heart belonged to, the woman who was so obviously unhappy in her life. Bette knew. Bette felt it.

    Getting up, the brunette took a breath and approached the door. She unlocked it and pushed it open. It was light and cool inside. Bette walked slowly further into the apartment, observing each detail closely.

    First thing she noticed was different furnishing, more modest, less pretentious than Bette had owned. Wall and floor covering remained the same. Bette saw that the wooden parquet was damaged in some places, which she supposed were the places where her weapons had been concealed. Next thing she noticed was the remarkable cleanliness of the apartment as if it was taken care of on a regular basis. But there also was this weird feeling of lifelessness and emptiness in the air, it was very apparent that not a single human being had lived here for a long, long time.

    Bette was standing in the middle of the apartment as she looked around. She couldn’t help, but feel like she was a stranger to this place. This place didn’t feel like home anymore. Right this instant she knew she wouldn’t be living here.

    There was a white envelope sitting on the coffee table. It was sealed and had ’Bette’ written on the front. The brunette approached the table slowly and turned the envelope over a couple of times, contemplating. The envelope seemed to be thick with papers of some kind. Lowering herself onto the sofa, Bette looked at the envelope. Her fingers slid under the opening and she tore open the envelope.

    The papers were originals of different contracts concerning transferring ownership rights from Mrs. Caroll to Bette. There also was a letter written by Mrs. Caroll. Bette took off her baseball cap and proceeded to read the note, which said:

    Dear Bette,

    I’m glad you’re reading this letter, because I know your punishment is over and you’re finally home. I hope you hold no bad feelings against me for the abruptness of my disappearance.

    As I’m writing this letter I’m being hospitalized at Cedars-Sinai Medical Center. My health is drastically deteriorating, I’m physically weak and emotionally spent. It appears my life is rapidly coming to a close. But Lord is with me. As well is with you, because I pray for you each and every day.

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    1. Hi Valerie,

      So happy to see a new update!

      Unfortunately i am at work now. I hope to read it tonight. Just wanted to let you know that i will comment tonight or another day.

      Xxx Bibi28

    4. Hi, happy to see another great (and long) chapter from you!

      I must say about a few things about this part.

      First – what i don’t like – i don’t like Nicole. I don’t trust her and i think she don’t fired Bette only because she wants her. I can see ultimatum for Bette from her in the future.

      Ok, next what i like – i like two conversation – Tina wit therapist and Bette with Ayola – i think both Tina and Bette can see things more clear after this talks.
      And of course the best part of chapter – Tina’s decision fight for Bette.
      I must say i very like your mature Tina and i think Bette need to stop be scared and do leap of faith with her.

      So, thank you for this part and waiting for next!

    5. Hi Valerie:

      This was a wonderful chapter, as you mentioned, maturity is taken its way on our couple, and they have the world on their hands, it’s their decision, all or nothing.
      I’m glad they are finding their way to each other, there will be obstacles, like that stupid bully parol officer, the talkative Brenda and Bette boss, but Tina and Bette together, can overcome any barrier.

      I start getting sad because this is the beginning of the end of this story, hope you keep updating the other, and maybe we could enjoy more stories from you.
      Thank you for the update, I’ll eagerly wait for the next chapter.

      P

    7. Hi Valerie,

      Yes, Tina is going to fight for her Bette! About time, she has to show Bette that she has grown up and will not leave her when there are problems and there will be

      That parole man is a utter asshole and what about Nicole, hmm. I hope she is trustworthy and isn’t going to use Bette’s past against her. For now i give her a chance.

      Ayola has my respect, she is a very good friend. I love her.

      Thank you for the update! It was worth the while!

    9. Geez so much emotions going on… stubborn and lack of communication…. good think they both had someone to turn too… but then there is still Brenda… thank you it was great..

    10. thank you so much for this wonderful long chapter.
      I don’t blame Tina for behaving the way she did, I mean Bette was living a dangerous life style that would have easily put Tina at risk. am glad both are finding their way back to each other. But what happens with Brenda?. post soon plea……..se

    11. Forgot to mention about Tina’s girfriend – seems it was not ease to Tina break up with her. First – because her parents like her, and second – Brenda obviously in love with her.

      But i hope mature Tina know what she wants – and it’ll be Bette

    13. It was wonderful having the update. Hopefully they can come to terms with their feelings for each other and most of all, Bette needs to get over her fear of being let down by Tina in the future. Tina has laid down the gauntlet and Bette needs to meet her halfway and accept that Tina is truly still in love with her and wants a future with her. And Bette needs to forget the past and let it go, and run as fast as she can towards their future. Loved the update. Thanks for posting.

    14. So happy to see an update. My heart broke for Tina when Bette pushed her away. The parole officer is a sadist. I hope Bette can keep her path until she no longer has to answer to him. He has treachery in his heart. Nicole will make a play for Bette to keep her secret. I think Bette needs to remove herself from this job. Tina has grown so much . She is willing to fight for Bette and chose her over family. The little girl is grown up. Please post again soon. Thank you.

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