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I Will Not Let You Fall
As soon as Bette caught the suggective way her manager was speaking and looking at her, the brunette almost coughed in disbelief. She made eye contact with Nicole. The sudden sexual tension ricocheted between them as they stared each other down. Arousal poured through Bette’s body like liquid, spreading its poison as it went.
”I think it’s perfect, isn’t it?” Nicole drawled, her eyebrow arched in teasing flirtation. ”Tequila would be great in it.” She slid off the bar stool and headed to her office. Casting one last glance over her shoulder, she noticed Bette following her with an intent, smoldering gaze.
The moment Nicole disappeared out of her sight, Bette clenched her jaw tight and swallowed. She suddenly felt annoyed for letting her carnal desires rise to the surface. Even though she had enough sexual frustration coursing through her body to set off an explosion or maybe three, still for all those years in prison she had managed to temper it and toss the thoughts of sex to the back of her mind.
She hurriedly busied herself with work to force this mystifying encounter out of her head.
”Hey Bette.”
The brunette raised her head to see Vanessa, one of the local band members that Bette had made friends with. ”Vanessa, hi.”
The woman smiled. ”How are you?”
”Good. Are you here to rehearse?” Bette wondered. She noticed two other band members on the stage and waved at them.
”Yeah. Do you wanna join us?”
”Um,” Bette looked around the bar counter as if to make certain she had no work to do. She then gazed up at the woman with a shrug. ”Sure.”
”I remember you told me about shopping for a new guitar. How’s it going?” Vanessa asked as she watched Bette putting off her black apron.
”It’s going slow,” Bette answered with a chuckle. She walked from behind the bar counter while she spoke, ”I’ve been to some stores and found a few favorites. But I’m still not sure which one to take.”
”I can help you choose,” Vanessa said.
”That would be great,” Bette looked up and smiled at the amiable woman.
There was someone walking inside the restaurant that caused Bette’s smile to drop in an instant. She stopped dead in her tracks. The tiny hairs on the back of her neck stood straight up. She watched with apprehension as Franklin Phillips approached the bar counter and took a seat on the stool, all the while holding Bette’s gaze with his spiteful eyes.
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Hi Valerie,
So happy to see a new update!
Unfortunately i am at work now. I hope to read it tonight. Just wanted to let you know that i will comment tonight or another day.
Xxx Bibi28
Valerie, Thank you for the update! This is one of my favorites. So happy to see that Tina is going to fight for Bette! Can’t wait for next update.
Thank you so much for the great update,I’ve been waiting patiently for you to post. I cant wait for the next part,please post soon.
Hi, happy to see another great (and long) chapter from you!
I must say about a few things about this part.
First – what i don’t like – i don’t like Nicole. I don’t trust her and i think she don’t fired Bette only because she wants her. I can see ultimatum for Bette from her in the future.
Ok, next what i like – i like two conversation – Tina wit therapist and Bette with Ayola – i think both Tina and Bette can see things more clear after this talks.
And of course the best part of chapter – Tina’s decision fight for Bette.
I must say i very like your mature Tina and i think Bette need to stop be scared and do leap of faith with her.
So, thank you for this part and waiting for next!
Hi Valerie:
This was a wonderful chapter, as you mentioned, maturity is taken its way on our couple, and they have the world on their hands, it’s their decision, all or nothing.
I’m glad they are finding their way to each other, there will be obstacles, like that stupid bully parol officer, the talkative Brenda and Bette boss, but Tina and Bette together, can overcome any barrier.
I start getting sad because this is the beginning of the end of this story, hope you keep updating the other, and maybe we could enjoy more stories from you.
Thank you for the update, I’ll eagerly wait for the next chapter.
P
oh my God…u’ve just made my day by update this story.. Thank you so much..
Hi Valerie,
Yes, Tina is going to fight for her Bette! About time, she has to show Bette that she has grown up and will not leave her when there are problems and there will be
That parole man is a utter asshole and what about Nicole, hmm. I hope she is trustworthy and isn’t going to use Bette’s past against her. For now i give her a chance.
Ayola has my respect, she is a very good friend. I love her.
Thank you for the update! It was worth the while!
Hi,
Great to have an update – love this story but would love Bette and Tina to start to make progress in getting back together.
Thanks for posting.
SG
Geez so much emotions going on… stubborn and lack of communication…. good think they both had someone to turn too… but then there is still Brenda… thank you it was great..
thank you so much for this wonderful long chapter.
I don’t blame Tina for behaving the way she did, I mean Bette was living a dangerous life style that would have easily put Tina at risk. am glad both are finding their way back to each other. But what happens with Brenda?. post soon plea……..se
Forgot to mention about Tina’s girfriend – seems it was not ease to Tina break up with her. First – because her parents like her, and second – Brenda obviously in love with her.
But i hope mature Tina know what she wants – and it’ll be Bette
Loved he update. Thanks
It was wonderful having the update. Hopefully they can come to terms with their feelings for each other and most of all, Bette needs to get over her fear of being let down by Tina in the future. Tina has laid down the gauntlet and Bette needs to meet her halfway and accept that Tina is truly still in love with her and wants a future with her. And Bette needs to forget the past and let it go, and run as fast as she can towards their future. Loved the update. Thanks for posting.
So happy to see an update. My heart broke for Tina when Bette pushed her away. The parole officer is a sadist. I hope Bette can keep her path until she no longer has to answer to him. He has treachery in his heart. Nicole will make a play for Bette to keep her secret. I think Bette needs to remove herself from this job. Tina has grown so much . She is willing to fight for Bette and chose her over family. The little girl is grown up. Please post again soon. Thank you.
It’s been 25 days..and i am dying to have an update of this story…give us some highlight of the day. Soon…pretty please?? :)