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I Will Not Let You Fall
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Tina winced at Brenda’s words, but she couldn’t bear to argue with her.
”The actual question is why are YOU doing this?” Brenda inquired. ”And by this I mean getting yourself involved with Bette Porter again. How crazy must you be to go back to a convicted murderer?”
Tina stared at her with growing anger.
”I’ve been sitting here, waiting for you and just trying to understand how she was able to ensnare you in her sneaky little trap once again,” Brenda continued her attack. ”What is so amazing about her? C’mon, enlighten me, open my eyes. Does she understand you better than I do? Does she treat you better? Does she fuck better?”
Having had enough, Tina rose to her feet. ”That’s it. Now that you’ve had your fun, please leave.”
Brenda contemplated for a moment, her resentful, wounded gaze fixed on Tina. She then got up and approached the blonde slowly. Standing face to face with her, the woman spoke hatefully, ”She’s nothing more but a contemptible piece of human garbage who deserves to rot in prison. You wait. You just wait till she ruins your life.”
Tina stood and watched her two-year relationship walk out the door to never come back. A part of her was saddened and disappointed at herself for hurting the person she cared for, while the other part felt greatly relieved at this turn of the events. A slow smile crept up her cheeks and she couldn’t stop it if she tried. It was incredible how easily inclined she had been in the past to let people mess with her head, influence her mind and make her live their way, and how firm she stood her ground now, how unwavering she had become in her convictions. She was genuinely determined to make the relationship with Bette work this time, despite of what other people said.
She undressed herself, took a quick shower, and then called Bette. The brunette answered almost immediately, which made Tina’s heart flutter. They talked deep into the night until Tina realized that Bette fell asleep. As much as she hated to hung up, sleepiness was sweeping over her hard as well. Hoping to lure Bette into her bed tomorrow so they could sleep together, Tina closed her eyes.
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Wow!!!
I’m login at the right time n be the first to put a comment..
Tks Valerie…i’ve been waiting this update so long…
Welcome back Valerie:
I have missed this wonderful story these past three months. Finally, Bette and Tina found their way to each other.
I honestly think that Brenda is a little bit cruel in this chapter, I’m not going to discuss if Tina cheated or not on Brenda, I don’t think she did; she may love Brenda those last two years, but she was always in love with Bette; a love Tina didn’t know if it would be reciprocated in the present because of the way she and Bette parted.
Tina broke with Brenda and I believe this one should move on, what was the point to be cruel with her ex unless she wanted Tina back with her.
The situation now is if Bette is being followed by any shadow of her past and if she and Tina could make their life together.
Thanks for this excellent chapter. Please post soon.
P
I feel for Brenda but since she knew about Bette, I figure she & Tina talked about her in some detail. Never got the sense that Tina expected Brenda to meet the “high”bar that Bette had set in heart those many years ago.
Remember, NEITHER Bee nor Tee were searching for one another when B was released (early to boot) from prison. They had NOT communicated during Bettes’ incarsaration. So Bette was hitchikin’ on her way to somewhere/anywhere!!!
The heart-stopping encounter at the grocery store running into Tina was NOT something planned!!!
You’re right some things are meant to be, the encounter at the store was like that.
Agree. One of the reasons I don try to set up an encounter after meeting a person or peeps that I want to encounter more than once.
This was a lovely chapter to return to!!! I didn’t realize how much I missed those two together or all of you. I am sitting on my couch in tears- happy tears. I have managed to get all my Graduate classes finished but two and they will be this summer. Now All I have to do is write Theses! This site is such a good writing prompt. Thanks to those who waited patiently.
I’m truly impressed with how many of you whether an author or faithful reader have pursued graduate degrees in sickness or in health!
Know that we cheer you on!!!
How brilliant to see the return of this great story.
Thanks for a Chapter which made me smile and cry in almost equal proportions.
See we still have the final page raising anxiety levels as usual though!
Happy to see we may not have to wait too long for the next post:-)
Seriously thanks for posting again on this story, it’s like the return of an old friend.
Loved it!
SG
100% with you sweet lady SassyGran
I almost couldn’t believe my eyes when I saw this post! What an amazing weekend this is turning out to be already!
This chapter was very much needed and long overdue for these two. My heart is as happy as I’m sure theirs is. This was so beautifully written as always, I swear I could feel every emotion.
Thank you so much for continuing this story and please post very soon!
my thoughts for sure
Hi! Thanks for the chater! It was definitely worth the waiting!
More than Tibette sex (which i also love very much) i love Bette’s words about how she thought about Tina every day. I like their time together.
Brenda – i don’t know but their farewell talk might be much worse, so i guess it’s was not awful for Tina.
But who was in SUV?
Waiting for the next!
Valerie understands the spiritual connection that is Tibette and has woven that into her writing. Brava!!
Now who is in the SUV??? Friend or foe? I may have to back to archives to feview “who was where” when Bette was arrested
Beautiful writing! Please don’t make us wait to long for an update to this wonderful story!
If person in the SUV is trouble wonder if has connection w/ Bettes’ jerk-off Parol Officer!! He certainly has it in for her.
Yeah, back after three months!!! Welcome!!!!
Shame on me that i wasn’t able to read before now!!! Busy with work and looking for a hotel in Paris to see a exhibition from Laurel Holloman aka Tina this July.
Ok, back to the chapter, i am excited that they connected again and that Tina is finally choosing to listen to herself and not doing what others tell her to do, feel or run her life.
Brenda is a bitch, ofcourse she is hurt i understand that, but she is just plain wrong and if there is someone that can possible put in danger Bette it could be her, pa Kennard or that other bitch Karen and the parole officer.
Why oh why must all the authors end their chapters with cliffies ???? to keep us hanging for sure ????
Valerie, i missed you dearly, please try to update in less than a month ????
welcome back Valerie, been waiting for this.
I feel for Brenda, but an happy Bette and Tina found their way back to each other. But I seriously fear for Bette, Tina’s family might try to mess with her
Thank you loved the chapter.. scary to be looking over your shoulder all the time..hope things get better for her soon.
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Honestly 16 pages is not enough..I really love this story very much :)
Please update really soon ^_^
Now Tibette are back i wonder what kind of obstacles will stand on their way??
3 years of parole is a long time, someone could come to provoke bette so she will be back to prison. No matter what, i hope Bette could hang on and keep clean for their future.
And i hope now Tina could really proof her loveto bette and stay by her side despite all the trouble they would have in the future.
Tks for the nice chapter Valerie
It’s been a month from the last update, re-read this one while waiting the next one, and feeling uneasy with one of Tina’s line
“……….And if I never, in my life, get to be with you for some reason, the very last time that this heart beats – it will beat for you.”
Why do i feel like it was a sign that somehow there would be trouble in paradise and Bette and Tina would be seperated again..???hemmm…could it be her father will use his connection to put Bette back in jail? Or Brenda being a crazy jealous heartbroken bitch seeking for a revenge?? or her parole officer spying over her neck waiting for her to fall down?? or even her dark life in the past has chased her back?? And thinking that why Karen was a bitch to Tina? Could it be that karen actually has fallen in love with Bette and she felt jealous of her own sister?
couldn’t wait to see…
Please…please…please update soon Valerie.. :)