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I Will Not Let You Fall
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Tina frowned, but it quickly dawned on her that Bette probably had no clue about modern social media. ”Oh, it’s a photo and video sharing social networking service. Everyone is obsessed about it these days.”
”Including you?”
Tina pondered over Bette’s question. ”I check it out once in a while.”
Another pause followed on the other end of the line. ”Is there a reason you want to post a photo of us together?”
”Um, no,” Tina said, taken aback. ”Look, if you don’t like the idea, I won’t post anything. I just wanted to share you with my friends. I don’t want to hide you.”
”Sounds awful, to be honest.”
Tina rolled her eyes, thinking that she had been right about Bette’s reaction. ”Whatever. Forget about it.”
”No, it’s fine. Post it if you want.”
Tina shook her head. ”I’ve changed my mind, so I don’t want to post anything anymore.”
”Tina.”
”Bette.”
Bette let out a sigh. ”Tee, I have to work. See you soon, okay?”
”Yep. Bye,” Tina said and hung up.
Closing her laptop, Tina walked over to the sink and put the empty cup and plate into it. While she was washing dishes, she regretted asking Bette’s opinion. No matter how childish it was, she felt annoyed by Bette’s reaction, even though she had always known that her and Bette’s attitude to privacy were different. Bette just wasn’t the person to enjoy attention of other people or go around and flaunt herself, whereas Tina had no strong feelings about sharing some aspects of her life with friends.
Shaking off her irritation, Tina concluded that Bette was right – there was no reason to post a photo of them together on social media, because their relationship was nobody’s business, especially given the fact how prying and gossipy some women around the community could get.
As Tina was wiping her hands with a towel, there came a knock on the door. Wondering who might it be to show up uninvited, Tina scurried across the living room to the front door. When she opened it, she came face to face with four unfamiliar men standing on her porch.
”Good day, Ms. Kennard. My name is Franklin Phillips. I’m a supervising parole officer for the United States District Court at Los Angeles,” a chubby, gray-haired man said, flashing his ID.
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Yai, site working again and new post from Valerie! Thank you!
I comment later about this chapter when i read it
Yes, a new chapter so soon!!!
But oh god, what a clif hanger!!! You authors like to keep us hanging!
Poor Bette, that must have been the hardest weeks for her, i applaud her strenght and ability to remain calm!
What is it with all those woman to try to seduce Bette at the same day? Nicole is a utter bitch to try to manipulate Bette with choosing her and the job or be fired.
Brenda is a sad woman, time for her to move on.
Franklin, what is he up to?
I hope you will update asap again, really want to know who took Bette out, someone of the past? and her phone is flat ???? please, please update asap!
So, i’m ready –
First – Tina, Tina – your father is lawyer and i thought you’ll be more smart in situation like this. Of course you shouldn’t allowed this scum Franklin search your place without order. And you know why – because you don’t have crimanal past, you you are not suspected in anything – no one judge will give order to police. So Tina – Xanax it’s not serious, get good lawyer and smush this jerk Franklin down.
Bette – maybe it’s only me but i have a feeling she getting annoyed with Tina and i don’t understand why. But i like how she handled situatioun with Brenda and Nicole.
And of course – this cliffi – who got Bette now. Maybe it’s people her ex-boss who now in jail?
This time i think she needs Tina help.
Thanks again for the new update so soon and waiting for the next!
Hey, Zhenya! Thank you for your comment, but just a small correction here – Tina’s father is a retired banker. It’s Bette’s father who was a lawyer. Anyway, I think Tina was so lost and frightened that she didn’t know what else to do other than just let a member of law enforcement search her house. ;)
Upps, my mistake about Tina’s father, i really think he’s lawyer. My bad.)
I think there is two ways to handle situation with Franclin.
First – Tina needs suit him and police – because i think they don’t have a right to get something from her place without order.
And second- now he knows Bette has money, maybe he wants them and then he can be go to jail for wanting for bribe?
And now when Bette abducted how Tina handling this situation? Maybe Tasha can help her? And who got Bette? I hope we soon find out.
Thank you for this chapter!
Excellent chapter, exciting and stressful.
I was scared when Franklin came to Tina’s house with two other police officers, and then when they found Xanax, perhaps it sounds innocent, but if it is not prescribed by authorized medical personnel, it may cost your freedom in the USA. I think Tina should call her lawyer before letting those morons to search her house, she could even ask her lawyer to come and be present during the search but is done, and she was very stressed.
I was fearful when Brenda entered the Planet and started provoking Tina and Bette, I thought Bette was going to react badly and; fortunately she behaves her best.
I was startled when the lawyer of Bette’s father went to her PO to give her the news about the death of her father and her millionaire heritage; I thought then why Franklin didn’t ask questions to Bette, why he didn’t even test Bette for drug and alcohol. I think Franklin has a plan to destroy Bette.
I was alarmed when Vanessa and later Nicole tried to seduce Bette and the worse when the last one, her boss fire her for not having sex with her.
But what really terrified me is your cliffhanger (I know all writers like to leave cliffhangers) but that car that stopped may be the SUV that was following her, they could be the remains of the cartel she was working for, or they can be some associates of Franklin perhaps they want Bette’s money , it may be anybody like Brenda paying some thugs to bother Bette, or Helena, who knows.
Anyway, it is hard to guess at this point. But you really caught all my interest as usual.
Thanks for the wonderful chapter and pps.
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I agree with all you said,
Bette had an ass boss, thinking she could pressured Bette to have sex with her over her need to keep her job.
I regretted Bette decision to let the lawyer talked about her father will in front of her asshole parole. Now he might blackmailed Bette for her freedom.
The familiar sound at the end, I hope it wasn’t a gun sound.
You made us wondering at the end of the story Please post soon, Valerie.
So delighted to see a new Chapter ! What a corker too!
Please do not leave us hanging here too long!
I absolutely love this story and looking forward to seeing where you are taking us!
Great storytelling, great writing!
SG
Val!
Thx for sure for this new post!! Been an interesting saga!
1. I think Brenda is responsible for sending A-hole Frank to Tina’s home knowing they would find the Xanex, so at the very least Tina could be in trouble.
2. How stupid does one have to be to a will be read in front of a PoS paroll officer like Frankin???? He will definitely try blackmail or the like.
How does Bette NOT tell Tina about that type of news???
3. Somebody knew to follow her to Ayola’s and she’s up a creek without a paddle. Phone is dead, so its worthless even as a tracking device.
4. Bette’s now former boss, Nicole, will certainly lie to Franklin about why Bette is no longer gainfully employed now that Bette rejected her unwanted advances.
Even in her past life bette had “street smarts”!!! What happen to that learned talent?
Geez so intense at the end.. and she just cant seem to catch a break.. so looks like someone wants her money.. geez i wonder who…
What an amazing story ! BRAVO !
Can’t wait to see what’s next . PPS