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    I won’t even say goodbye

    Story written on July 5, 2015 by robyntibetter.
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    Bette pulled herself up to aim. The angle was impossible with Tina in between. She heard footsteps from the garage down below and knew Jorge had run out of his last resort in saving the shipments, now the only chance to survive was the back garden to lackshore. In less than three seconds, they would

    Bette pulled herself up to aim. The angle was impossible with Tina in between. She heard footsteps from the garage down below and knew Jorge had run out of his last resort in saving the shipments, now the only chance to survive was the back garden to lackshore. In less than three seconds, they would burst in.

    A shot was fired, deafening. White hot burning pain scorched through her flesh. Tina didn’t have time to process when she fell under the force of a raging bullet biting into her body. She landed on her side, her rib cracking, But the fire seemed to have come from behind, which was odd, her mind registered.

    Then another shot broke the second of silence. It sounded close to her but above her.

    She peered out of her arms curiously as Jodi’s body bent into a humanly impossible angle and dropped back.

    “Vincent what did you do!?” A man’s shout crackled through the door.

    Tina rolled over and watched in horror to see Jorge standing in the doorway, stunned.

    Bette turned as well. Her hand holding the gun fell to her side. Time might have stopped, her heart ceased beating as she waited for the man to raise his gun at her.

    Another man charged in behind Jorge. It was Jacob’s second, Thomas. He was slightly confused when he saw the two staring at each other in a trance. “What the fuck!?” Thomas screamed as he bolted. And when he reached the second floor, he nearly tripped over Jodi.

    It was when Jorge did it. He aimed, cocked, and squeezed the trigger.

    “No!!!” Tina lunged forward.

    A bullet glided through thin air.

    Bette held up an arm to shield herself. But it was too late. The bullet made a blasting noise when it penetrated her skin and bounced off her rib. She saw herself falling, and she couldn’t do anything to catch herself. Her head hit the remnant of what used to be a table, and warm, sticky red liquid poured out the cut.

    Jorge glanced upward then, his lips pursed in a cruel line. He was betrayed, by the last person he would imagine betraying him. And the source of all this hatred, was the woman lying beside his wife. But he was distracted when Bette moaned in pain.

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    1. Author:

      hello my good friends, I am horrified to hear about Lipitora’s accident. It’s really really shocking and terrible. To never drive drunk and to always be careful crossing the road!
      I would want to dedicate a chapter to her, but a better one, a happier one maybe. Keeping up my prayers.

      As for the content in this chapter, I know, I know it’s depressing. The violence and drug abuse are probably not that easy to read. But it’s crucial to my story. So I tried to cram it all in one chapter. Consider this a transition.
      Personally, I have struggled with a mild drug addiction several years ago because of a depression episode. It was not as bad though. But I know there are hundreds of thousands of people suffering from similar disorders or emotional trauma. Drug is never a solution, I promise you from experience.

      I love you all and hope everyone is ok.

      Peace
      Robyn

    2. Wow, that was very hard to read. Drugs or other addictions are never the answer.

      I can understand why people do it and i am glad you came out stronger.

      It was a poweful chapter.

      Thank you for the update!

    6. wow what movie is this? this is some the best action I read on here, even better than some of the movies that come out….sigh poor Tina, drugs? why? people often mistake that drugs ease the pain, yet they do just the opposite..i loveeeeee this!!

    7. I have to say that i am so happy to see this story being updated. It captivated me from the very beginning. That being said, i have all the faith that this story is headed in the right direction hopefully. Thanks for posting!

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