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If I Fall: Chapter 10
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Later that Night—Alice’s Surprise Party
Alice and Jules pulled up to Helena’s mansion at exactly 8:15. The house seemed dark, although Alice guessed her friends were all gathered out back by the pool. As Jules slowly pulled the car into park, Alice couldn’t help but openly ogle the woman in the driver’s seat. She couldn’t believe that in just three short weeks she had found someone with whom she had so much in common, who was funny, talented, caring and not to mention so God damn sexy Alice could hardly control herself when they were alone together. But as wonderful as Jules was, Alice just wasn’t ready to give herself completely to someone else yet. True she had slept with countless others since she was last with Dana, but those people were just faceless strangers meant to make her temporarily forget all her pain. Not one of them actually meant anything to her other than a quick fix to kill time with. She had hoped that Jules was different than the rest, so she was understandably afraid to jump the gun too quickly and demean their relationship into one of mere sex without any intimacy. She was determined to take things slow this time around, especially when she still had trouble getting through her day without thinking of Dana. And lately those thoughts consumed her brain at least twenty times a day. However, Alice knew she was making even the slightest progress since they no longer occurred every other second. And she knew that she had Jules to thank for that.
Alice never imagined that after their somewhat awkward first date, she’d be spending her birthday with this woman, ready to take the crucial step of introducing her to her friends. It wasn’t like Alice wasn’t anxious to show the blonde off to her friends, but she was a bit gun shy about that facet of the relationship as well. Sure her friends had been encouraging her to "get back on the horse" and start dating again for as long as she could remember. But now that it was a concrete reality and Alice had actually met someone special enough to bring home to her friends, she couldn’t help but wonder if they’d disapprove. Not necessarily disapprove of Jules, but maybe voice their doubts over whether Alice was mentally and emotionally stable enough to handle another relationship so soon after the last one. To say her last relationship tore her apart from the inside out would be an understatement, so she could understand her friends’ possible hesitance towards welcoming Julianna to the fold with open arms. Her concerns were quelled however, with each passing day that she got to know Jules and how truly exceptional she was. She was almost sure her friends would fall in love with Jules as soon as Alice let them meet her.
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Bradshaw approves highly of this chapter :D I’m agreeing with muted about that hug, if danish think they can have a platonic friendship I think they are madly mistaken, Jules is gonna get his heart broken, yes I put his on purpose because I still believe he’s hiding a penis in there somewhere, that’s why he and Alice haven’t had sex, he doesn’t want his secret revealed :P Am i right? This was a cliffhanger, I really wanna know what Alice and Dana say to each other now lady, bad you for making me needy! However it could go terribly wrong and they end up arguing, or will they actually communicate and tell each other what’s going on? Will Jules catch them? PPS so I can let out a sigh of relief when I read a glimmer of hope for danish :)
I’m feeling awfully needy too. I didn’t even think about them possibly having an argument – but things seem to spiral out of control quickly with our beloved danish. Jules seems so good for Alice, but her unfinished business with Dana is going to leave her in the cold eventually. I like how Jules reacted to Dana. She’s not going to let Alice go without a fight, but Alice’s heart is elsewhere. Imagine if Lara was at the party. She wouldn’t have appreciated that not so little hug. Maybe Jules and Lara can get together.I was psyched to see that you updated so quickly, but I was tempted to delay reading because with your busy schedule – who knows when you’ll have time to update again. You aren’t too overworked right now, are you? lol
Great chapter as always. You portray and develop the characters so perfectly. I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds and hopefully it will be a looong happy one :P Thansk for such great writing. Post soon!
ah man – you’re gonna leave it there. well ok – more to look forward to in the next post. thanks. that was cute.
this is such a great story. you’ve got alice down to a T! i love it. i’m feeling sorry for dana,and nervous for alice and jules. can’t wait to see what happens next.
LOL @ Alice kissing Jules’ eyelid on the first date. No matter how Jules tries to mark her territory, though, I have this distinct feeling that she’s going to be left out in the cold… there’s too much left undone between Al and Dana for her to be able to stop it. Liked the chapter a lot, swiss, post soon!
I loved the tension bewteen Alice and Dana. The talk can go either way (and is probably more likely to end in an argument), but as long they have chemistry I’m fine with it. :)
This is a great I can’t wait for more
The Eternal Hug, eh? Nice. And Jealous Jules is pretty awesome, too. I feel bad for her though, it’s so obvious that Dana and Alice are nowhere close to being over each other. And I’m with you, the new season is making me adore Helacious times a thousand. I just hope the show writers realize what a good thing it’d be. Knowing them, though, we’ll have to depend on fanfic. Anyway: Danish good.
“Pain in the ass, Yoda is,” – that made me smile. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Lovely thank you. PPS