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If I Fall: Chapter 10
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"Well, I assure you Dana, I meant nothing by it. It was all in good fun for the radio," explained a slightly flustered Jules.
"Hey, no harm, no foul right…so who needs a drink, I think I need a drink, anyone want a drink? No? Okay…," Dana trailed off and excused herself as she searched frantically for the bar.
Alice stood there, unsure of what to say next. But looking around at her friends, it seemed that everyone else was as baffled as she was.
"Soooo…that was Dana," Alice laughed and turned to her girlfriend.
"She seems…nice, I guess," Jules offered.
"Yeah, she is. She’s just…well, Dana I guess," Alice laughed to herself remembering how adorably nervous and awkward Dana could be in social situations.
"Alice, I want to like her because I know she’s your friend. But I’m sorry, I’m reserving the right to think she needs her head examined after everything she put you through."
Bette couldn’t help but overhear Jules’ honest declaration, and it made her happy to see that Alice had found someone who cared that much about her. And it made her want to get to know this woman better. So she walked over to Jules and put her arm around her shoulder. "Would you care to come with me to get the birthday girl a refill on her drink?"
Jules smiled sincerely at the offer. "I’d love to." She turned back to Alice who gave her an adorning look of approval and winked at Bette appreciatively.
As soon as they were out of earshot, Alice turned directly to Shane, who was busy canoodling with Carmen. "I’m guessing I have you to thank for Dana’s presence?"
Shane pulled away long enough to roll her eyes at Alice. "How do you know Helena didn’t invite her?"
"Because Helena doesn’t even mention the name Dana when she’s around me. I doubt she’d be welcoming her over here with open arms."
"Fine, it was me. I’m sorry if you’re pissed, I just thought that you’d kinda want her here."
Alice laughed a self-deprecating laugh. "I guess I kinda do."
"Good…but I’m not sure she knows that." Shane nodded her head towards the darkened beach where Dana was standing, accompanied only by a glass of white wine, as she stared out at the ocean.
"What? You think I should go over there and tell her I’m glad she’s here?"
Shane shrugged. "She does look kind of pathetic standing out there on a deserted beach all by herself."
Alice paused for a moment and considered the not-so-subtle suggestion. "Pain in the ass, Yoda is," she mumbled and walked off in direction of the beach, wondering what the hell she was going to say to Dana.
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Bradshaw approves highly of this chapter :D I’m agreeing with muted about that hug, if danish think they can have a platonic friendship I think they are madly mistaken, Jules is gonna get his heart broken, yes I put his on purpose because I still believe he’s hiding a penis in there somewhere, that’s why he and Alice haven’t had sex, he doesn’t want his secret revealed :P Am i right? This was a cliffhanger, I really wanna know what Alice and Dana say to each other now lady, bad you for making me needy! However it could go terribly wrong and they end up arguing, or will they actually communicate and tell each other what’s going on? Will Jules catch them? PPS so I can let out a sigh of relief when I read a glimmer of hope for danish :)
I’m feeling awfully needy too. I didn’t even think about them possibly having an argument – but things seem to spiral out of control quickly with our beloved danish. Jules seems so good for Alice, but her unfinished business with Dana is going to leave her in the cold eventually. I like how Jules reacted to Dana. She’s not going to let Alice go without a fight, but Alice’s heart is elsewhere. Imagine if Lara was at the party. She wouldn’t have appreciated that not so little hug. Maybe Jules and Lara can get together.I was psyched to see that you updated so quickly, but I was tempted to delay reading because with your busy schedule – who knows when you’ll have time to update again. You aren’t too overworked right now, are you? lol
Great chapter as always. You portray and develop the characters so perfectly. I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds and hopefully it will be a looong happy one :P Thansk for such great writing. Post soon!
ah man – you’re gonna leave it there. well ok – more to look forward to in the next post. thanks. that was cute.
this is such a great story. you’ve got alice down to a T! i love it. i’m feeling sorry for dana,and nervous for alice and jules. can’t wait to see what happens next.
LOL @ Alice kissing Jules’ eyelid on the first date. No matter how Jules tries to mark her territory, though, I have this distinct feeling that she’s going to be left out in the cold… there’s too much left undone between Al and Dana for her to be able to stop it. Liked the chapter a lot, swiss, post soon!
I loved the tension bewteen Alice and Dana. The talk can go either way (and is probably more likely to end in an argument), but as long they have chemistry I’m fine with it. :)
This is a great I can’t wait for more
The Eternal Hug, eh? Nice. And Jealous Jules is pretty awesome, too. I feel bad for her though, it’s so obvious that Dana and Alice are nowhere close to being over each other. And I’m with you, the new season is making me adore Helacious times a thousand. I just hope the show writers realize what a good thing it’d be. Knowing them, though, we’ll have to depend on fanfic. Anyway: Danish good.
“Pain in the ass, Yoda is,” – that made me smile. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Lovely thank you. PPS