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    If I Fall: Chapter 12

    Story written on January 22, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    More of Alice’s birthday party, Jules starts to show some signs of jealousy and Bette tries to help by explaining the love that is danish. A heated debate about Mary Tyler Moore ensues; Dana’s emotions get the best of her, and she somehow effects a private celebration between Alice and Jules.

     

    "So basically I’m worrying for nothing?"

     

    "Alice and Dana meant a lot each other and they still do, I don’t think that will ever change. But Alice cares about you very much, it’s written all over her face. Who knows what the future has in store, but I can tell that you’re good for her. And I’m pretty sure she knows that too."

     

    Jules smiled gratefully at Bette as the latter smiled back reassuringly before politely excusing herself in hopes of finding Tina. As Bette searched for her partner, she couldn’t help but overhear Jenny, Max, Shane, and Carmen talking about the same exchange currently taking place on the nearby beach.

     

    "Shh, you guys, I think they’re coming back," Jenny warned the others that she could vaguely make out two silhouettes locking arms and heading back towards the party.

     

    "Oooh, what do you think happened out there?" Carmen asked of no one in particular.

     

    "You guys, who cares? It’s Al and Dana’s business. If they want to tell us they will," Shane relented as she took a long drag of nicotine.  

     

    Carmen rolled her eyes at this and turned back to Dana and Alice who were emerging from the beach arm in arm. "I don’t know babe, they seem to be looking pretty friendly right now."

     

    The stylist directed her attention to her two friends, who did appear to be quite chummy as they made their way off the beach and up the stairs leading back to the party. Alice seemed to have her arm locked through Dana’s, and they were both wearing matching smiles. Yet, Shane astutely noticed that as soon as they made their way to the top of the steps, Alice quickly released Dana’s arm and made sure to put some space between them.

     

    Dana wasn’t sure if she was making too much of it, but she noticed that Alice became more formal and distant to her once the writer noticed Jules sulking in the corner by herself. The athlete knew she was in no position to be picky or make demands on her friend, especially since they had made such great progress in just one night. But still, she had to admit that the abrupt change in Alice’s demeanor hurt.

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    1. Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS

    2. that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.

    5. Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.

    7. Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx

    10. So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.

    11. I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.

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