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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

     

    "Actually I was gonna say tired, smart ass. You know, we don’t all wake up at the ass crack of dawn and go for a three mile run. Why the fuck are you calling me so early anyway?"

     

    More laughter from Dana’s end, and Alice couldn’t understand what was so funny.

     

    "Al, I hate to break it to you, but it’s 1:30."

     

    "What!?" a panicked Alice exclaimed as her eyes widened and she turned her attention to the neon green numbers on her alarm clock flashing 1:28. She could still hear Dana’s muffled laughter on the other end, and although she instinctually opened her mouth to yell at her for it, she stopped and found herself laughing right along with her.

     

    "Okay, okay, very funny. Alice is hung over and slept through breakfast."

     

    "And lunch," Dana added.

     

    "Was this the reason you called me," she asked, feigning annoyance.

     

    "Actually, yes. Well that and to tell you that Shane and I have been sitting here for the past hour waiting for you to grace us with your presence."

     

    "Well why’d you guys wait so long to call and wake me up?"

     

    "Uh," she hesitated before muttering the rest of her sentence as quickly as possible, "we thought you might be busy."

     

    Alice was well aware that there was a science to understanding Dana’s subtle, little innuendoes, especially when it came to ones considered sexual. But she had also once considered herself a pro at deciphering Dana. Even when the athlete was unsure of what she really meant, Alice was often able to explain it to others, even to Dana herself. But now either due to the hang over, or the time they’d spent apart in recent months, Alice had no fucking clue what Dana was alluding to. That is, until she unconsciously glanced around the room and saw a note on the pillow next to her.

     

    And slowly but surely, the previous’ nights events started to trickle back to her murky memory. There was a note on her pillow…and it shouldn’t be there now…because Jules should have been. She quickly sat up and the room began to spin as she felt the full effects of her partying for the first time that morning. Contrary to her urgent desire to lay right back down, she grabbed the note off the pillow and scanned it hurriedly.

    Comments

    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    2. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    3. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    4. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    5. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    6. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    7. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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