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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    "And there’s nothing more?" the stylist implored, shaking Dana from her thoughts.

     

    "Okay, what are you getting at Shane?"

     

    "Nothing. Nothing at all, Dane. Look, I know you wouldn’t do anything to purposely hurt Al, that’s obvious. But I know you, and I can tell something’s changed with you since you and Al started talking again. So I just ask that before you do anything, be sure it’s really want you want."

     

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    It was 1:55 before Alice was able to get herself out the front door. She was running late as usual, but this particular morning she had a terrible hang over to blame it on. Either  she was operating in slow motion, or everything around her had sped up into overdrive as she struggled unsuccessfully to find her equilibrium. She couldn’t tell which mind-numbing alternative it was, but with 2 Excedrin in her stomach, a pair of sunglasses perched on her nose, and a bottle of water in hand, she felt decent enough to venture out into the world.

     

    As she made the arduous drive over to The Planet, she tried to get a hold of Jules via cell phone, but to no avail. "Shit, Jules. Pick up….ugh, pick up…" Voicemail. "Hi, it’s me. Sorry I didn’t call you earlier, I actually just woke up. Jealous? Don’t be, I’ve got a massive headache reminding me why it’s not okay to chase my Tequila shots with a bottle of Sauvignon Blanc. Anyway, I’m heading over to The Planet right now, so if you wanna join me I should be there for awhile…Listen, I’m uh, I’m sorry about last night. I really hope you’re not mad ’cause I’m sort of hating myself for it this morning…Okay I’m hanging up now."

     

    Minutes later she slowly sauntered through the main entrance of The Planet just as Shane was putting money on the table and saying goodbye to Dana. Alice noticed her exit right away and didn’t understand what was going on until they met in the middle of the café, both sporting sunglasses to conceal their matching hangovers.

     

    "Nice of you to show up," Shane teased.

     

    "Nice of you to leave as soon as I get here."

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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