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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    So when she woke up this morning, she wasn’t surprised about the sense of urgency brewing inside of her…the one that made her fully aware that she now had a mission. To somehow undue the horrible mistake she made by walking away from Alice in the first place. She knew it wouldn’t be an easy task, but she was willing to try her hardest to fix the mess she made of both their lives.

     

    Acknowledging her new purpose, she reasoned that she’d have to figure out ways to spend as much alone time with Alice as possible. This would be difficult considering there was still the matter of Lara being her girlfriend to deal with. Dana wasn’t sure how to handle the inevitability that it wouldn’t work with Lara, but she knew that she’d eventually have to, especially if it ultimately meant being with Alice again. It was just that the athlete admittedly sucked at ending relationships, no matter who was on the other end of them. And it was no excuse, she knew that, but being scared to feel in turn lent itself to being scared to hurt other people’s feelings. But after all, Lara was still her girlfriend and she deserved to know that Dana wasn’t able to give her her heart because it still belonged to the only woman who ever really had it…Alice.

     

    Yet right now all Dana was concerned with was getting to spend more time alone with the writer. Based on the few conversations they had shared in the past weeks, it seemed that the only times they were truly able to communicate with each other was when it was just the two of them. It was like the comfortability and simplicity of being together again seemed to get more muddled and convoluted once other external forces were surrounding them, namely either of their respective girlfriends or their watchful friends. It wasn’t until the rest of the world was around that things started to get uncomfortable between them, and Dana vowed to find a way to remedy that as well.  

     

    This was why Dana bit her tongue when her initial instincts told her to let Alice know that Shane wouldn’t be there when she arrived, afraid that the writer wouldn’t be comfortable yet spending any more one-on-one time together so soon after their talk. So she simply smiled to herself after telling Alice that 20 minutes would be perfect.

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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