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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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She decided to sprint the last mile, not so much in adherence to her training regimen, but more precisely to push herself hard enough so that she wasn’t able to think anymore. Her morning run had been filled with a torrent of thoughts just as her restless sleep had been, and most of activities from the day before. And the thoughts, while ranging in length and intensity, all shared on common thread: they were all about Alice. She was at the point where thinking about the writer had become so intertwined with her daily routine that she couldn’t really remember a time where Alice hadn’t consumed all of her thoughts. Whether it was a fond acknowledgment of how pretty she looked when she wore her hair a certain way, or a more complicated analysis on where they went wrong and how they could find their way back to each other, Alice Pieszecki was never far from Dana’s thoughts.
Except the more difficult ones, which were comprised of ideas on where to begin to win the writer back, filled Dana’s head more frequently now than any others. She knew she hardly deserved a second chance with Alice after just turning her back on their relationship like she did, and she could reluctantly admit that it did seem somewhat selfish and unfair to change the rules of the game once again after she had finally convinced Alice that all she wanted to be friends. But Dana couldn’t contain the growing feeling inside of her—a feeling that had burgeoned into a fervent intensity. It demanded recognition of the simple fact that there was indeed a right way to live her life, and that way was undoubtedly to be with Alice. It was the right way not just for Dana, but she hoped for Alice as well.
She loved the writer so much, and at the same time, she was scared of her. That intensity brewing inside of Dana was like nothing she had ever felt before, and she wondered if it was the same feeling she saw reflected in Alice’s eyes all those months ago. It frightened and made her severely uncomfortable in ways that seemed to elude any definition that Dana could brand them with. And such feelings were there, filling up all the empty spaces inhabiting Dana merely because of Alice and the love they once shared.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )