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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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And after another mile and a half of such intensity, her body finally gave out, forcing her to stop and take in some much needed oxygen. She did just that, first slowing down to a walk, and then placing her hands over her hand and sucking in as much air as her lungs could take. And when she finally stopped moving completely, she bent over and placed her hands on her knees and looked around only to realize she was standing outside The Planet. Suddenly, the visions of Alice returned and the reality of their situation quickly followed. A surge of thoughts washed over Dana once again, and she felt the urgency and panic overtake her. Unfortunately, these feelings gave way to some blinding nausea and she found herself running to the alleyway behind The Planet and getting sick all over the pavement. She knew it was most likely from the physical abuse she just inflicted on her body, but she had to wonder if she was so hopelessly in love with Alice that the emotional withdrawal she’d been feeling had now begun to make her physically ill. Something had to give, and it had to give soon.
She wiped her mouth and shakily made her way to the front entrance. She knew her friends would most likely still be there enjoying their coffee before they all headed off to work, but she wasn’t planning on staying. Not like this at least. The idea of seeing Alice, while it typically sent tingles seething throughout her entire body, may just have been too much this morning. She quickly scanned the parking lot and found no Mini in sight, letting out a sigh of relief as she entered the coffee house.
"Hey, there’s Dana," Carmen informed the group as Dana walked into The Planet wearing a pair of red Adidas shorts, her running shoes, and a white fitted tank top almost entirely saturated with sweat. Her hair was pulled back in a tight pony tail although all that running had loosened a few strands, which were freely playing across her glistening forehead. Lara, who was already behind the counter preparing the ingredients for Dana’s protein shake, saw her girlfriend come in and quickly handed her a towel.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )