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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

     

    "Meaning what exactly?" Dana’s prompting shook Alice out of her reverie.

     

    "Jesus, Dana. You just don’t get it, do you? See that’s the problem. You go around doing whatever the hell you want, leaving a path of destruction in your wake. And not for one second do you even acknowledge how your selfishness is affecting everyone else. First me, and now Lara? You just don’t understand what it means to give yourself to someone else, do you? To really be in it with someone, and be completely open and vulnerable, and not so fucking afraid of love. No, instead, when the going gets tough, Dana gets going."

     

    "Alice, why are you so angry with me?"

     

    "Because I’m tired Dane, I’m just tired of this whole thing."

     

    "What whole thing, what are you talking about?"

     

    "I’m talking about this thing between us, Dana." Alice motioned between them with her hands as she tried to explain. "You know exactly what I’m talking about. This back and forth, this mixed message bullshit. One day you’re telling me you want to be friends, and yet the next you find it difficult to be in the same room as me. And then you give me that bracelet for my birthday with that uncharacteristically honest note. I mean, what was that about? And then less than a week later you’re insulting me and my girlfriend. And to top it all off, before I can even fully comprehend what all that means, you’re busy telling the bartender at Milk to call me because you belong to me."

     

    "So?"

    "So what the fuck am I supposed to think, Dana," she exasperatingly questioned. "I can’t keep up with you! You keep changing the rules on me. It’s just not fair."

     

    "I don’t understand what you want from me."

     

    "What I want? It’s what I’ve always wanted from you Dana…the truth. Just tell me once and for all how you feel. Please."

     

    "I don’t like where this conversation is going, Alice." She abruptly stood up from the couch, feeling the effects the alcohol was having over her equilibrium, and slowly made her way towards the kitchen.

     

    "Why? Why, because it requires you to be honest with me about how you feel?" She tried her best to bite back the rising anger and threatening tears now consuming her insides.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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