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If I Fall: Chapter 17
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She’d always been a fairly prudent driver. Hell, Alice even teased her sometimes, calling her "grandma" every time the woman refused to drive more than 3 miles over the speed limit. But right now, after the tantalizing invitation she had just received from Alice, Jules was a driver of a vastly different nature. Alice, buckled safely next to her in the passenger seat watched Jules with heightened amusement. Not only did she hightail it out of the restaurant parking lot, but once she got onto the freeway, she wove in and out of the lanes, cutting the other cars off without warning. And once they got back onto side streets, she barely came to a stop, instead opting to roll through nearly every stop signed designed to slow them down. Something had definitely gotten into Jules this evening, and Alice took enjoyment in knowing that it was her. She smiled proudly to herself, reveling in the fact that she had such an inspiring effect on the blonde, just as they pulled into the parking lot of her building.
Jules quickly put the car in park and turned to Alice before grabbing the back of her head and practically swallowing her mouth whole. The writer barely managed to pull back, just as her lungs were running out of air, and looked back at Jules in wonderment.
"Woah, there honey. Someone’s a bit worked up, huh?"
Jules felt her face grow instantly hot as she looked down at her hands and giggled. "Yeah, sorry about that. It’s your fault though. That’s just what you do to me."
"Well why don’t we go upstairs and I’ll show you what else I can do to you?"
Alice grinned mischievously at her girlfriend and led her into the building. Once they entered the apartment, it wasn’t too long before their lips met again, this time Alice’s passion was equal to that of Jules, and neither woman had any urge to pull back or slow it down. The writer knew that they’d gotten to this point before…so damn close that she was so sure it would happen. But every other time before right now she had found some reason to pull away. That reason was most assuredly one Dana Fairbanks, and no matter what she did, Alice was typically unable to turn her brain off and stop thinking about the athlete. And she didn’t want to admit that Dana was the reason Alice couldn’t give herself to someone else, but she also recognized how unfair it would be to sleep with Jules and be thinking about her ex the whole time. Except right now, in this moment, she was determined not to let Dana stop her from finally making love to someone else. To really, truly give herself to another person, without any fear or regret. The way she never thought she could again after Dana walked out on her, but hoped she’d eventually be able to after first meeting Jules.
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awesome. i am so excited to see what happens next.
Oh man my heart is breakin here, this was a great chapter!!, I hope Dana doesn’t give up though, thanks for the post!!
Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?
Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.
Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.
First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.
Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!
Wow that was just perfect I can’t wait to see wat happens next
Ouch you are killing me here. PPS. You can’t leave us hanging like that, not nice.
I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx
damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D
fanfrikintastic!!!!!
And so it begins…Love this…you have definately captured Danish Angst…Dana needs to really step it up! Great Chapter! PPS!
simply put – well done!
that was great I just hope that dana will keep fighting for alice they so belong together please post soon I love it great update
wow so good loved it..great work:)