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If I Fall: Chapter 23
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Nearly twenty minutes had gone by since the last words were spoken. Alice, of course, was tempted to stop what she was doing and let her brain catch up to the rest of her body. Yet the alternative she was currently inhabiting seemed to be too good to put an end to. Her mind seemed to be reeling since approximately the moment Dana had stepped into the bathroom at Helena’s earlier that night. And right this second, feeling the full weight of the athlete’s body pressed up against her own surely wasn’t helping her thought process any. As much as she wanted to take a time out and process just what was happening, her brain couldn’t find its way out from being consumed by the feel of Dana’s smooth skin, the touch of her soft lips, or the sensuous way her body curved to meet Alice’s own. And despite the nagging feeling that resided in the pit of her stomach—the one that was trying to remind her to slow things down and allow them each some time to comprehend exactly what was happening between them, the other part of her felt as if she may explode if Dana stopped kissing her. On second thought, she supposed that she may explode if Dana continued to kiss her.
It had been nearly nine months since Alice had last allowed herself to feel the emotions that her entire body was alit with right now. And god help her if she wasn’t feeling every last bit of it. In fact, her passion for Dana—the undying love that she possessed for this woman—seemed to be coursing hotly through her veins as she dragged her lips slowly down the athlete’s neck. And she wasn’t prepared to answer any questions about "why now?" or "why tonight?" had she finally stopped fighting those feelings and gave into what her heart had been telling her all along.
All she could offer was the knowledge that she truly had no more fight left in her. It was a long, pained effort to live day in and day out denying the primary reason her heart was beating. And for someone like Alice, who wore her heart on her sleeve and prided herself on living a life marked with honesty, living that sort of lie was a nightmare. No longer could she force herself to look away when Dana was in view. Or to not gawk openly at her every time she’d show up after a workout, veins popping and sweat shimmering across her skin. No more could she deny the overwhelming urge to taste those soft, inviting lips every time the athlete bit them nervously. Or to deny the urgent, unrelenting need to make love to Dana, over and over again until their bodies gave out from the sheer exhaustion of it all.
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YAY!!! I love it! Post Soon!
Yay! I’m sitting in a hotel room in London, online for the first time in almost a week, and I see this on the first page. So happy you posted, and what a great chapter. I’m glad my girls are talking and holdong off on just jumping each others’ bones, although I have to be a perv and admit that I think they should jump each others’ bones all the time. And I know she’s already been claimed, but can I have Jules? Give a girl a break, I got through all of L3 without even a kiss. But it was such an awesome time, and all f them were gorgeous. Leisha and Erin kept watching each other talk on stage, and it was enough to make your heart melt. Well, maybe just mine since I’m a sap. This comment is hella long, sorry!
you blow me away. that was so good. i am glad alice went easy on dana when she tried to walk out, that would have sucked if they already got in a fight. i knew jules was going to know (but how could she not?) and yeah she should have let alice have it – but i’m glad she didn’t. we need to meet up in ny sometime soon? i will email you.
What a great update. This is such a fantastic story it’s been such a journey that you have taken this pair on to get to this point I can’t wait to see what you write for them together. Thanks for updating.
I have loved this story from the very beginning. This chapter is another example of your finest writing, beautifully executed. My heart melted while reading A & D’s tender moments. They absolutely belonged together and thanks for reuniting them at last. Simultaneously, I also felt sorry for Jules. Her speech was accurate, wise, thoughtful and most important of all, flawless. It is really pointless to be someone’s #2. Lastly, I want to convey to you my utmost admiration of your ability to deliver a perfectly crafted story. Bravo!
Hey, I’m totally new here and this was one of the first stories i started reading, I’ve been a bit of a silent reader but I finally decided to come and join the gang. I’m so happy you’ve found time to come and write again, this was a flawless and heartfelt chapter and I can’t fault you. Amazing =)
you rock!! so much too, more more please!! i crave this story so much it’s a little weird actually. Your one of two writers that i get really excited for wen i see u’ve posted i just can’t get enough and now that they’re finally back together its just gunna get so much better, poor jules though oh so sorry for her but it had to happen for danish sake. I can’t wait till next time on if i fall…. neways until next time i guess :) snaps for the swissmister!!!
Excellent chapter as always, swismiss24!! You write both girls so well — so honestly. And it’s great that they are actually communicating. I also love the maturity of the both of them. They both wanted to stay and get re-connected but both realized they had other things they needed to do. Gives me hope that things will work out this time around for them. “Capitan” Hee! Jules? Come on over here and MaGoose will take care of you. ;-D Thanks so much, swismiss24. This really was an amazing update to the story!
I feel sorry for Jules. She’s a great woman, if she were real and here, well somebody would be awfully lucky to have her! hehe This is one awesome chapter swismiss. But even if Jules is great and all, it wouldn’t be fair o neither of them if they continued sailing their ship. Thanks for updating! dear awesomeness:)
Nicely done yet again! I really like the fact Danish slowed down and talked to each other. It’s encouraging to see their relationship maturing. As much as I liked the impulsiveness of “Finally” in S2, I equally enjoyed those few glimpses we had into their still-intimate but less frenzied conversations. Thanks for rounding out their interation for us here. Congratulations on your Bar results! As always, I’m looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for continuing.
I hope you plan to update this AMAZING story soon!