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If I Fall: Chapter 23
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But putting aside her fervent desire for a moment, it had also proven near impossible for the writer to go on each and every day pretending that a piece of her heart was not missing, or at least with someone else. The fight was over. Yet, Alice didn’t feel like she lost at all. On the contrary, right now, her world seemed more right and more perfect than it had been since Dana turned it upside down all those months ago.
And of course she was scared. She was, in fact, terrified of being abandoned and left in shattered pieces without her once again. But Dana had promised that that wouldn’t happen, and Alice understood that she either had to put a little faith in Dana’s word…or live forever with the constant ache in her heart, signifying a life without the love of her life.
For her part, Dana too was resisting the small, undulating urge to stop Alice from dragging her lips across the hollows of her neck in order to decipher if this was reality or just one more delicious fantasy she was having. It was honestly difficult for her to believe that this was all really happening, despite her attempts to quell her confusion and just go with the fact that Alice wasn’t stopping her advances. So while the athlete had a million and one questions buzzing around in her scattered mind, the only thing that seemed to make any sense to her was the feel of Alice’s lips on her own.
So long she had waited to get another chance to be this way with her again, that Dana had nearly come to terms with the fact that she’d never actually get the chance at all. And now that it was happening, a big part of her wanted to stop and find out why. And yet, an even greater part gave into the fear that if she did stop, she would never be allowed to start up again.
Although both were becoming more light-headed by the minute, each carried on in their endeavors with the clarity that being this way with one another felt more true than anything else in their entire lives. That finally, after all this time spent getting it wrong, they now had the opportunity to get it right…together.
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YAY!!! I love it! Post Soon!
Yay! I’m sitting in a hotel room in London, online for the first time in almost a week, and I see this on the first page. So happy you posted, and what a great chapter. I’m glad my girls are talking and holdong off on just jumping each others’ bones, although I have to be a perv and admit that I think they should jump each others’ bones all the time. And I know she’s already been claimed, but can I have Jules? Give a girl a break, I got through all of L3 without even a kiss. But it was such an awesome time, and all f them were gorgeous. Leisha and Erin kept watching each other talk on stage, and it was enough to make your heart melt. Well, maybe just mine since I’m a sap. This comment is hella long, sorry!
you blow me away. that was so good. i am glad alice went easy on dana when she tried to walk out, that would have sucked if they already got in a fight. i knew jules was going to know (but how could she not?) and yeah she should have let alice have it – but i’m glad she didn’t. we need to meet up in ny sometime soon? i will email you.
What a great update. This is such a fantastic story it’s been such a journey that you have taken this pair on to get to this point I can’t wait to see what you write for them together. Thanks for updating.
I have loved this story from the very beginning. This chapter is another example of your finest writing, beautifully executed. My heart melted while reading A & D’s tender moments. They absolutely belonged together and thanks for reuniting them at last. Simultaneously, I also felt sorry for Jules. Her speech was accurate, wise, thoughtful and most important of all, flawless. It is really pointless to be someone’s #2. Lastly, I want to convey to you my utmost admiration of your ability to deliver a perfectly crafted story. Bravo!
Hey, I’m totally new here and this was one of the first stories i started reading, I’ve been a bit of a silent reader but I finally decided to come and join the gang. I’m so happy you’ve found time to come and write again, this was a flawless and heartfelt chapter and I can’t fault you. Amazing =)
you rock!! so much too, more more please!! i crave this story so much it’s a little weird actually. Your one of two writers that i get really excited for wen i see u’ve posted i just can’t get enough and now that they’re finally back together its just gunna get so much better, poor jules though oh so sorry for her but it had to happen for danish sake. I can’t wait till next time on if i fall…. neways until next time i guess :) snaps for the swissmister!!!
Excellent chapter as always, swismiss24!! You write both girls so well — so honestly. And it’s great that they are actually communicating. I also love the maturity of the both of them. They both wanted to stay and get re-connected but both realized they had other things they needed to do. Gives me hope that things will work out this time around for them. “Capitan” Hee! Jules? Come on over here and MaGoose will take care of you. ;-D Thanks so much, swismiss24. This really was an amazing update to the story!
I feel sorry for Jules. She’s a great woman, if she were real and here, well somebody would be awfully lucky to have her! hehe This is one awesome chapter swismiss. But even if Jules is great and all, it wouldn’t be fair o neither of them if they continued sailing their ship. Thanks for updating! dear awesomeness:)
Nicely done yet again! I really like the fact Danish slowed down and talked to each other. It’s encouraging to see their relationship maturing. As much as I liked the impulsiveness of “Finally” in S2, I equally enjoyed those few glimpses we had into their still-intimate but less frenzied conversations. Thanks for rounding out their interation for us here. Congratulations on your Bar results! As always, I’m looking forward to the next installment. Thanks for continuing.
I hope you plan to update this AMAZING story soon!