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    If I Fall: Chapter 6

    “Woah, Dane. I don’t even know exactly what I need right now, so just slow down a bit. Let’s just play it by ear, okay? We’ll see how coffee at The Planet with the gang goes tomorrow and just take it from there, alright?

    “That sounds perfect…it’s just…okay, I don’t want to question a good thing, but I have to ask. Where’s this all coming from? I mean, between yesterday and this afternoon, I just as well figured that you hated me and wanted nothing to do with me ever again.

    “Dana, I could never hate you.”

    “You sure about that?” she asked with a bit of disbelief underlying her words.

    “Well, I admit that I tried. But you’re my best friend, that never changed. I was hurt and I still am. And a part of me is still angry with you, but I don’t want to carry around that grudge anymore…it’s just too heavy.”

    Dana couldn’t help but smile up at her gratefully. With just a few words it felt like a huge weight had been lifted off of Dana’s shoulders as well. And for the first time in a long time, she felt that things just may be alright between them.

    “And don’t worry, I promise not to mention anyone’s peeper ever again.”

    “Don’t make promises you can’t keep, Pieszecki.”

    They both laughed. And Alice had to admit that it felt good. It felt almost…normal. But then she caught Dana staring at her intently, almost to the point of admiration, and their eyes locked and neither was able to turn away. And suddenly, all of the emotions Alice had tried to suppress for the sake of “friendship” came flooding back to the surface and she started wondering what it would be like to reach out and touch her again. But alas, she quickly caught herself, turning away and standing up abruptly.

    “Okay, I should probably be going.”

    Dana wasn’t sure what had just happened, but it was as if Alice turned some switch off and was able to revert back into being distant again. Maybe this was just too much for her. Or maybe she didn’t understand that Dana truly regretted the way she went about things. She couldn’t just let Alice walk out without making sure things were still going to be okay.

    “Wait, Al. I just want you to know how truly sorry I am, for everything. I never meant to—”

    “It’s okay, Dane, I get it.”

    “But, I—”

    ”I really should be going.”

    “But Al, I think we should probably talk about this…”

    “Baby steps, Dane. Baby steps.”

    Defeated, Dana nodded and summoned up the best reassuring smile that she could.

    “Okay, I get it.”

    Making her way over to the front door, Alice smiled once more at the athlete and said goodbye. Dana quietly closed the door behind her, silently questioned why the writer refused to discuss the breakup with her. But after a few moments, she gave up the futile task after convincing herself that she should just let it be for now and be grateful for the newfound hope she had.  

    ‘After all,’ she thought, ‘I may even get my best friend back.’

    Comments

    1. Cute danish comments at the beginning of the story.The “peeper” scene was one of the few times that I felt bad for Dana. It made me cringe when I saw it, and when I read it. Man, Alice was in bad shape, and she couldn’t stop herself. I love that they are finally on the road to friendship, though I expect it to be rocky. Thanks so much for the update!I have no willpower when it comes to fanfic. I either find myself running late for work in the morning because of an update, or in this case, late for a Christmas party. I think I have 9 minutes to get ready, but it was soooooooooo worth it! Happy Holidays.

    2. I don’t know why you’re not entirely happy with this, I think it’s fabulous. I love the explanation as to how Helena and Alice became friends, and of course the danish comments…I did that too, a few chapters back in my story, and laughed the whole time I was typing it out. Anyway, I’m rambling but I love the direction you’re taking this, and it’s making more and more sense as it goes on. You make it realistic and true tothe characters, which is a hell of a lot more than I can say for the original version. Thanks for posting this, have a good holiday and congrats on getting through your finals!

    3. I don’t see anything to dislike in this chapter. I enjoyed it; I thought it was realistic and the pace is right. Small moves, for the both of them, but actually a giant leap from where Al and Dana had been. We’ll have to see how they get on next time at the Planet. Good on you for getting through your finals, post soon, and have a Happy Christmas. Cheers!

    4. If only something like this had happened in the show :( you have no reason not to be 100% happy with this because it’s amazing. You have me laughing one minute, pausing for deep thought, almost in tears the next it’s just brilliant and it seems to explain a lot of things that we didnt see in the show. I too love how Helena and Alice became friend, I can so picture that happening, however don’t slate starbucks coffee, I use it every day at work :P xx

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