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    If I Fall: Chapter 9

     

    "I’d love to go with you, Dana, but it’s probably not a good idea since tonight is about Alice. But I really think you should go."

     

    Shane and Carmen watched the exchange and hoped that Dana would just suck it up and be woman enough to support Alice after everything that had happened. And once again Shane couldn’t help but notice the palpable tension between the couple once the topic turned to that of Alice and Dana.

     

    Finally, after a few more minutes of venting her doubts, Dana reluctantly agreed to show up, but reserved the right to exercise her escape clause if she thought Alice didn’t want her there. After the four women finished their meals, and Lara had returned to the kitchen to finish her shift, Dana brought the party up once again.

     

    "So who’s gonna be there tonight?"

     

    "You know, just us, Alice, Tina, Bette, Helena obviously, Jenny, Max, Kit, Angus, Jules, some people from LA Magazine, KCRW, her sister, and other random friends of Alice’s."

     

    Dana nodded slowly as she tried to figure out which name didn’t register. "Wait a second, who’s Jules?"

     

    "Uh," Shane scratched her head unsure of how to describe Alice’s new girlfriend. "It’s a friend of Alice’s." Shane figured it wasn’t exactly a lie, since they were in fact friends. Plus, it wasn’t like Alice had ever referred to Jules as her girlfriend…at least not to Shane.

     

    "No I’ve never heard of any Jules," Dana began to feel the frantic pangs of the fear of the unknown creeping slowly upon her, "how does Alice know her?"

     

    "Um, ha, funny story actually. She called into The Chart a few weeks ago and invited Alice to The Knitting Factory to hear her band play, so—"

     

    "Wait a second," Dana interrupted. "Jules is that girl that was flirting with Alice on the air that day! She said that I wasn’t worth Alice’s misery, or something like that, right after she finished hitting on her."

     

    Shane nodded, "That’d be her."

     

    "So what are they like, dating now? Was this the girl Alice had a date with the night of Jenny’s party? Is it serious?" Dana questioned, forgetting her plan to try to act cool about the whole thing and not show any signs of jealousy. But as she finally heard all her worst suspicions confirmed, the pain of her constricting heart was too much to bare, and she asked all the questions that had been troubling her mind for the past three weeks.

     

    "Actually yeah, they are dating. I’m not sure how serious it is because Alice hasn’t really let any of us meet her yet, but I’ll guess we’ll find that out tonight," replied Shane.

     

    Dana couldn’t even plaster on a phony smile this time, as her mind reeled with thoughts of seeing Alice with someone new. "Yeah, I guess we will."

     

    Shane and Carmen exchanged a concerned look and turned back to Dana who was quietly ripping up the napkin she had been wringing in her hands. Her gritted teeth and furrowed brow convincing no one that she was happy the woman she loved was slowly starting to move on.

    Comments

    1. I’m liking this more and more every time you post, so yay or something. And I knew I could spot a fellow Helacious fan…but it’s so hard to write her properly while Dana’s still (rightfully) around. Well, for me it is, anyway. And you’re right, I do feel even worse for Lara, although I think she’s kinda digging her own grave by trying to be supportive. Poor soup chef just can’t win no matter what she does. Anyway, I hope Dana gets her head clear about the relationship she’s currently in before she goes making trouble with Alice’s new one…and yeah, I still like Jules. Please make her say “motherfucker” at least once, will ya?

    2. Poor soup chef muted? Poor soup chef my ass! If you ask me she’s the only thing keeping danish apart right now, that and Jules who seems to perfect to be true, can you make her have a penis or something so Alice can break up with her and danish get back together? Ok maybe not that, your story is doing ickedly awesome without my ‘ideas’. You describe Dana perfectly, there’s no other word aside perfect. I just hope she can get her shit together and realise that Alice is the one for her and she truly won’t find another woman better for her. You know I would be kinda happy with Helacious in season 4 since Dana is no longer around, I’ll put it that way since it hurts less :( Now I’m just typing for the sake of typing so I’ll stop and say awesome post, I need more of it, so you must do as Bradshaw says and write more :D xx

    3. Can’t wait for the party! I love where this is going! You’re doing a fantastic job my dear :D This was too short! I gotta know how the party goes damnit. lol. ok so great job and PPS. Oh and I’ll check for your PM. lol

    4. De_leish – if Jules has a penis, she may be the perfect one for Alice, and we’ll never see danish again. lolI can’t feel sorry for Lara because she’s going against her own nature, and she knows that Dana still has feelings for Alice, but hey she got what she wanted. She got Dana back, but not all of her. Dana’s ability to avoid things strikes a little too close to home, so I’m going to leave her alone on that one. lolLet’s get this party started! Soon, please. :-)

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